After the Body Swap, the General Tore Off His White Moonlight

Is it necessary to make an adult man or a general so stupid and brainless? Is this the brain of a normal person? This character creation is a failure and a waste of such a good subject. From the beginning to the end, the heroine has no desire for revenge. The people around her died so miserably. It seems that the heroine is currently living quite happily. Some of the plots are a bit exaggerated, especially the setting of money, which can easily reach hundreds of thousands or millions. Does the author have a misunderstanding about the price of goods in ancient times? Many plots cannot withstand deep criticism. The heroine is smart, alert and has martial arts skills. With a lot of dowry, why was my life so miserable in the past? The people around me were either feeding dogs or wolves. There are also the names inside, each of which is my A Zhao, Zhao Zhao, Meng Meng, Miao Miao, I feel really cold when I listen to the book, and there are secret guards in the house to monitor me, and the male protagonist is always under surveillance. I was kept in the dark about what the master didn't tell them without asking them proactively, just to see his loyal people being fooled. This plot is really unnecessary and forced to make the plot reasonable. Now the author has spoiled in advance that he will not be with the male protagonist. Hey, writing a book is not easy, and the writing has a lot of room for improvement.

I read the tweet and reviewed the book for the first time. I thought it was a short story, but it turned out to be very different from what I thought. This kind of article can end in more than 200 chapters at most. If the article is too long, the story logic will be confusing. It was indeed readable at the beginning, but the male protagonist was too stupid and the female protagonist was too virginal. After many chapters, I could hear other people's voices. The subject matter of this kind of article is inappropriate. And if you can hear your voices, then you can do more things. In the end, you can't tell what the golden finger is for, and you can't feel who the female protagonist is with. Together, the author is not talking about being with the general. In more than 400 chapters, can't we create an obvious male partner and the female protagonist to be together? Of course, it doesn't have to be that the female protagonist has feelings. It's so disgusting. If the author can't create it well, he can go the route of the main female protagonist being the only one who is beautiful. This is really too bad. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

It's too stretched. . . . . . . I don't want to talk anymore. . . . Chapter 144, ten days have not passed yet! It's all about the psychological activities of various characters and some self-righteous dialogues. What about the high-ranking IQs? Who ate it?

What is written here? Is a general so brainless? How many times have I said it was a misunderstanding? It's too far-fetched. Reading a book can make people mad. I really don't understand. Why do you have to forcibly incapacitate the male protagonist? He can be a general who can crawl around, but he doesn't know the difference between right and wrong. Is he so holy? ? ? ? Who is the audience for this kind of novel? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The idea is interesting, but the idea is just interesting. The author has no knowledge of ancient times. A group of generals, princesses, wives, and ladies talk dirty words at every turn. Suitors chase married women to express their feelings. After the heroine's sister betrayed her father and brother, she asked her own mother to work as a servant for her. After the incident of stealing someone, the old lady thought she could go to the Du family and continue to be the old lady. The concubine directly called her aunt "mother", which was so confusing that it was unbearable. The characters are numerous but useless, and they repeatedly depict how a group of psychopaths talk to themselves. The male protagonist in the early stage, the female protagonist's mother, and the loyal Hou Wuzheng in the later part can be said to be exactly the same characters, with the same plot and lines repeated under different names. The character setting is unconvincing, which is the biggest flaw, especially the heroine, who has martial arts, money, business talent, and economic power. She is abused to death every day, and is finally wasted to death in a shabby courtyard. She lives worse than a servant. How can I run a house without any prestige? How to manage so many shops and make money? Finally, the whole article has an extremely disgusting misogyny. Men are originally good, but they are deceived by the elders (females) in the family, and all good men are deceived by women. Originally, romance novels don't need to be too over-the-top if there is a bit of female rivalry in them, but this book is a bit too much. There are not many good people among women. Not only are they not good people, but they are also horribly twisted and evil. They have no conscience when they do bad things. There are not many bad people among men, and there are quite a few innocent ones among the bad people. I have nothing against female villains, but the female bad guy (rather than the bad woman) in this book is way off the mark.

The author... (Wei Nuonuo) My dear... When will their bodies be able to be replaced... Can you tell me (*≧ｍ≦*) (o｀з'*)(´∀｀)♡

It's a big mess, swapping bodies, using the time-traveling belt system, wearing books, and all kinds of things that are not biological. There is no legitimate biological child, and all kinds of child swapping. It's so messed up that I can't stand it.

It was not satisfying in the end, because it was really hard for the female protagonist to still like the male protagonist after being slandered by him. It would be better to write the ending so that we get divorced on the spot and then the paralyzed one pursues them together.

The plot is a bit slow, but I like it very much. I haven't read a novel in almost two years and I just started reading it these two days - The entire rescue is just a child making a mess. It's so outrageous, but it's so exciting. Hahahaha. I like Yun Jin very much. His love is so good. The author must let them be together in the end.

The plot is very procrastinating. One thing can be written in seven or eight chapters. They are all obvious things. It is as if the people in the book have no brains and no words. The plot is incredibly confusing and logical.