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Except for a lot of typos, everything else is fine, you can take a look. But I personally don't like the author's arbitrary evaluation of historical figures, especially that Yue Fei is a warlord. If Yue Fei was a warlord, he wouldn't have been ordered to lead someone to death even though he knew he was going to die. When writing a novel about fictional history, he thinks he has seen through history and makes arbitrary comments without studying it clearly. The author is too arrogant.

The writing is old-fashioned, the descriptions are delicate, and it's really good

The more you read, the deeper you get. The character descriptions are very good, and it has the flavor of a real novel.

The writing is very good and rhythmic

The writing is pretty good but the plot is too plain. Whether it's the villain on the career line or the heroine on the emotional line, the characterizations are sparse and not clear enough, but the battles are quite detailed. I wrote dozens of chapters about the breakup of the engagement and the separation of the family. The characters didn't come up, and the plot was very bland, making it hard to read.

This book is vividly and wonderfully written, with detailed plot descriptions. You can also learn a lot of knowledge through this book. The author has certain literary skills, so it is worth reading!

The author deserves praise for his hard work!

Well enough! Not bad!

To be honest, it looks good. However, there are a lot of fights, and the overall pacing is okay. The ending is the first part. I can accept it and look forward to the follow-up.

The ancient rhyme is immersed in youth, and there are love flowers in the dream of reincarnation. Good writing style and charm! Good!