I Became a God by Opening an Inn in Another World

📢Don't miss it if you pass by, nice business articles Inn name: Xianyuan Inn🏙️(modern architecture in ancient times) System category: Inn management category (can be upgraded) System name: 777, Xiao 7, Tongtong (can be transformed) Heroine: An Ge (peerless beauty) (plush control)💃🏻 Ideal: Lie down and live a retirement life of petting cats and walking dogs Fake inn. Get rid of King Juan and live a salty life. As a result, I discovered that I was destined to work hard. Hobby: Making money$_$(I'm obsessed with money)💵 Personality: Distinguished between likes and dislikes, competitive, easy-going, happy He is helpful to others and tends to be soft-hearted. Male protagonist: Hu Jiu (super handsome) Race: Nine-tailed fox (infatuated) (possessive)🦊 Characteristics: All-round management talent🖐🏻️ Identity: The young master of the demon clan (the devil incarnate)ﾍ😈ﾍ 🎤The setting of this book is great, there are many infrastructures that will be unlocked with every upgrade. To a certain extent, it has changed the lives of the people in this plane and enriched their spiritual world. Very cleverly, through the legends of immortals, they subtly change their views. 🕹️In each plane, the heroine's system is not unique. There are many hosts, and the hosts can cooperate or hunt to make them become part of their own power. Later, the gods, messengers of gods (who can ascend or become gods) and servants of gods (lucky ones from other planes who are recruited and selected, have a chance of ascending) appear, which are generally mysteries and can only be solved one by one. 📮The personal experiences of the little characters in the book are also a major feature of the book, which promotes the development of the plot to a certain extent. Random tasks are naturally triggered and need to be completed to obtain rewards. What's more, there will be a punishment mechanism. 💟As for the emotional line between the male and female protagonists, I think it comes out of nowhere. The mental journey is not very obvious, it comes too suddenly. ✔️All in all, it's quite beautiful and worth a look.

The subject matter is very good. If it can be written well, it will definitely be a good book. It's a pity that the author's writing style is too immature and inexperienced, and the characters' dialogues are always a little stupid and awkward. Especially the emotional line, which probably lacks detailed description and is full of inexplicability and far-fetchedness. I didn't want to embarrass myself, so I gave up.

The subject matter is novel, and it was originally very attractive at the beginning, but the plot became more and more clumsy later on. Some plots are just like the outline, just mentioned in one stroke. In the article, the plot of Xu Da coming to find the prince and expressing his loyalty can be more detailed, and some language descriptions can make people feel more immersed. Some plots that are more detailed than the outline are done by the heroine's employees, and they are briefly mentioned. The heroine is completely notified, and then agrees to their request, and finally completes the task easily. The heroine has been emphasizing in the early stage that she wants to be salty but has to get involved, but I can't see when the heroine has tried hard. She relies entirely on the system and the employees who are devoted to her. The relationship lines are messy. The male protagonist started to have feelings for the female protagonist just a few days after becoming an employee. The character design is also inconsistent. It is said that he is in front of and behind the female protagonist. However, when the male protagonist was first recruited, he was not domineering in front of the two employees at all. The language is very awkward and the writing is not good. The heroine keeps appearing in embarrassment, and then waits for the male co-star to find out. In addition, the author loves to write "can't laugh or cry" and "can't cry without tears", making the whole atmosphere even more embarrassing. In the first 60 chapters or so, there were three or four very powerful male protagonists who liked the heroine. They also fell in love with the heroine after meeting them. If it hadn't been labeled, I would have thought it was an otome novel. The villain Gu Wen also had no foreshadowing in the early stage, which made it very abrupt when he was later revealed to be the mastermind. The heroine didn't find anything in the early stage, but later she started to investigate the mastermind. She just passed by Gu Wen and noticed something was wrong. Then he told the staff and caught him very easily. I even suspected that the author didn't write the outline, and suddenly wanted Gu Wen to be the villain later in the writing. Chi Mu, who was in the sixth grade, couldn't walk when he saw the heroine, and he didn't doubt whether the heroine was an immortal. The author should change his career to write Otome novels. The writing style and the plot are all at the level of elementary school students, maybe even worse than some elementary school students.

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I personally think it's pretty good This is the first time I read a novel with this theme. It's okay. The theme is very novel and the heroine has a smooth journey. However, the emotional line is very sloppy. But the heroine is a career-oriented heroine, so it's normal for the emotional line to be sloppy. A bit like Shuangwen? After all, all the things the heroine encounters along the way can be solved very well. In short, the heroine is extraordinary and is the favorite of the group. However, some of the words used feel excessive. I often feel a little aesthetic fatigue when I see the same words often. Anyway, my suggestion is, don't turn on the comment setting, and you won't be able to see other people's comments. Relatively speaking, it's very smooth to read, and it won't be affected by other people's comments. This is also the first time I've turned off comments to read an article, and it feels good. Before, I could always see other people's very irritating comments, or comments that were bad for rankings. It upset me and affected my mentality when reading articles. I also gave up writing because of the pressure of commenting and bad rankings. Of course, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. I think they are okay. You have to see for yourself whether they are good or not. If they are not good, it is still too late to discard the article. I gave it an average rating because I felt that it was a bit inexplicable that the male and female protagonists fell in love. There was also a time when the female protagonist returned to the Blue Star plane. There was too little description. I felt that the author was a bit hasty in writing? After all, I mentioned that a director accidentally saw the heroine and felt that she fit the role in the play very well, but then there was no follow-up. It felt a bit incomplete, that's all.

Nice

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage, the heroine's design collapsed. She was very holy. She was obviously capable of killing the enemy, but she still kept her 😅😅

The author writes very well! ! !

The male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are inexplicable. He puts his mark on the female protagonist without confirming the relationship. How is this different from peeping by a stranger? The female protagonist in the back is too holy and can tolerate enemies. The plot in the back is too watery, just like a running account.

In fact, I think this one is better-looking than Taoyang for two reasons: ① The political part of Taoyang is actually a bit unreasonable and too hasty. ② Taoyang is unfinished. The author was originally planning to plan a store or something, but for some reason he suddenly forced the end. He obtained a large number of crystal nuclei and developed a drug to eliminate zombies, but it was inexplicably gone.