His Majesty's Sweetheart's Waistcoat Fell Off

①The heroine's character has changed too much, and the male protagonist is even bigger ②Identity: The plot jumps too quickly. One minute the heroine is the little prince, and the next minute she is the immortal attendant. The male protagonist is a loach one minute and a candle dragon the next. ③Let's talk about the foreshadowing of the male protagonist's identity. It's not that there is no foreshadowing, but the foreshadowing is too short and too simple. It almost tells you the answer directly, and there is no sense of involvement at all. ④The weak female protagonists are injured almost all the time in the plot. Except for a few who are specially used as stepping stones for the female protagonist, they try hard to create an image of the female protagonist who is not too weak. Almost all the slightly unusual ones can completely abuse the female protagonist. ⑤ Again, the male protagonist. As the only candle dragon, even with the restriction of the exquisite ring, doesn't the male protagonist know his weakness? He is also forced to marry the female protagonist. If the female protagonist is forced to marry the female protagonist, if it is the male protagonist's choice and he also likes the female protagonist, then why do you still pretend to owe him money? Why do you create an image of enduring humiliation in the early stage, being weak and prone to being forced? ⑥The heroine is your little highness. It's okay to serve as a fairy attendant for Zhulong, but is it appropriate to be humiliated by others? ⑦... Forgot After looking at it for a while, I temporarily picked out a little bit.

Really great!

Rotten, miscellaneous, bland, fake

One of my favorite books₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎♡

I don't know how to say it, I can't understand it, it's a bit confusing, I don't know who made some words and actions.

Some sentences are a bit hard to read, and the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are a bit inexplicable, but the plot is still acceptable.

Nice

I found the plot particularly appealing to me, even though the storyline didn't feel particularly complete.

I really can't stand it, the plot is relatively novel, the dream is true love, and I hope to get full marks in the course of happiness this year

I feel that what the author wrote is a bit like Tong Hua's "Sauvignon Blanc". Some of the imaginary ideas are quite good, but the thinking is confusing. I read many sentences many times before I realized what they meant.