The Cultivation of Immortality Against Heaven in the City

This storyline is too lame. The reborn Immortal Lord, who was reborn and returned to the city to practice, actually joined the national organization to practice as an ordinary team member. What the hell, these scumbags are already masters in cultivation, and they can surpass the strongest with just a little practice. This plot is really too bad. Also, the realm setting is too poor.

Why do you want to write about being reborn to the age of sixteen? Isn't it good to be reborn as eighteen or twenty years old or older? It's okay to be reborn as a sixteen-year-old, but don't write so much romance. A lot of older beauties like this sixteen-year-old sophomore in high school. Isn't it disgusting? What's even worse is the love between the sixteen-year-old and his teacher. The author, do you want to go against human ethics? This is written by a sixteen year old and is not recommended for book lovers over the age of seventeen.

Make the police and women look silly and cute, just like sand. At least you have to make a few normal ones to be reasonable! 😤

It's good, but it's not enough. But why is this a good novel that no one reads? Why is this so good? It shouldn't be rated so low. I personally think it's good, but I can't read it after reading it.

After writing more than 300 chapters, the protagonist went to the second level of Qi training, but he failed to describe the realm of a warrior. There are as many warriors as there are now that I have never heard of before.

There's really too much nonsense. It's a lot of nonsense.

I don't know what I wrote. Maybe my diploma is too low.

Very verbose, ink-stained, not decisive in doing things, a waste of time

The male protagonist who is 1.74 Meters and 130 pounds makes people have no desire to look at him. No matter how immortal you are, you have no momentum at all with this figure.

Whoever sees it knows it, and insists on not seeing it. 😭