Soul Land V: I Am the Destined Archvillain

Every time when I feel that I can't do it, I walk to the zebra crossing, and then I am a pedestrian!

They say Tang San is hypocritical, but he writes a character who is even more hypocritical than Tang San. After reading part of it, I couldn't stand it at all. The protagonist is full of emotions and the writing is very fake. The writing style is also average, and many places are contradictory and inconsistent.

Sexy, Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong, Tang Yuehua, etc., One of the most erotic novels I have ever read

Comments on the book: 1. The first position does not respond. The title of the article is in contrast with the plot. The title is centered on the "villain". From chapter 1 to chapter 110, there is no indication that he is a villain. The author directly skips the time period and does not clearly explain the development of his power. 2. From chapter 133 to the end, the plot is confusing and there is no response. This is an adaptation of a fan novel, which means it completely deviates from the theme. 3. Chapters 111 to 120 are about problems with the system. This is not a system novel. The first part of the article does not respond to the first paragraph, and the plot is confusing. To sum up: the title of this novel does not match the title, unless it is about the protagonist wanting to betray the system. Just respond a little bit.

The male protagonist, this is also called the villain. There is no scheming at all. He also deserves the title of villain. Waste of time,

The early stage was pretty good, but unfortunately the later timeline was too confusing.

So-so, boring

The male protagonist is very decisive in killing, and he also has relatively few studs. Unlike other fans who just start a harem.

It was just fine at the beginning, but as it went on it became more and more messy, with many characters added. Moreover, your original intention at the beginning was to demolish Tang San, and you couldn't stand his sanctimony and inconsistency. Why did it change as you wrote it? However, the author is quite smart. He realized that he immediately went off topic, so he immediately gave Tang San a few scenes and abruptly brought the rhythm back, which made people feel uncomfortable. In fact, I understand what you want to express later, but I still feel that the writing is messy. You need to be clear about the theme of your novel. What are you doing? It is to debunk or expose, and it is not to write a sequel. After reading Chapter 110, I gave up the book and couldn't stand it anymore. It's a mess. Overall, it's an anticlimactic, but not worth recommending.

At first, I thought it would be good, so I came to read it. However, after watching it for a while, the plot was too confusing. The protagonist was not as good as Tang San in the original "Douluo Dalu". At any rate, Tang San still insisted on his own character. The protagonist of this book gave me the feeling that he is sometimes in the Wuhun Palace and sometimes Tang San. It is exactly the same: the wind blows and the wall shakes on both sides. It's not as good as Tang San's character design, (***cute!) It's simply unsightly, bah! There are many typos and wrong words in the article! Not recommended for reading! Not recommended for reading! Not recommended for reading! Not recommended for reading! Not recommended for reading! Not recommended for reading!