Kowloon Sealing Heaven Technique

In general, I feel that it is too focused on the main plot. Some plots of the branch plots are not handled well, the details are not polished well enough, and some are not polished at all. My suggestion is to write at a slower pace and the storyline should not be too cliche. I still like to read the books of Eternal Brother, especially his Purple Blood Holy Emperor. I am short of words and will write these (the above is just my personal opinion)

If you can't finish writing, don't post it.

Leave! People! Now! Eye! Of! Do! Who! One! Week! Neither! Renew! One chapter! Well! Heart!

Making alchemy is the same as cooking rice in a rice cooker.

Nothing but show-off and slap in the face, the plot is so-so

After reading a few chapters, I gave up decisively.

The protagonist has the mind of a child, picks it up with his hands, and wants to touch everything.

The plot is absurd and the logic is not rigorous enough.

Updates are too slow and grinding. One plug-in is not enough, here comes another one. Abandoned the article

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