Everyone's Job Changed: I Became the Undead Monarch

The male protagonist is obviously very strong, but he is written to be very hot and useless, and he hasn't even said that he can't use his mentor! Isn't it good to develop alone? When you go to school, do you have any resources? Anyway, it's not written. At most, you can get some points by winning the competition. If you change a weapon, you might as well just go solo and grind it. Isn't it good for the secret realm? ? Moreover, it is said that professionals in their 30s are so powerful that they will shock you. A summoned object of yours can be directly multiplied by 20 times without killing it instantly! ! !

Okay, it's not good-looking. I regret rating it as good-looking. It's just water and nothing new.

The first part was okay, but after more than 320 chapters, it was written like shit. Xiao Ran disappeared inexplicably, Wang Xiaoyu and his mentor appeared inexplicably, Bai Quan's name for him also changed, and he entered a new system inexplicably. , And it was not explained clearly to the readers. It was a mess. Starting from the time when the Phoenix Essence and Blood were being snatched, all the way to the end, the plot was also a mess, the character creation was also a mess, and the protagonist was forcibly reduced to intelligence. Was this written by a different person? It can be said that it was completely messed up.

Nice

This book is full of bugs. The author is no better than a junior high school student. If he can't grasp the data well, just make a table. Do you want me to teach you how to do it?

Lin Changfeng ascended like this? ? ? ? ? ? ?

It's so messy. It's so uncomfortable to watch.

The protagonist is upgraded too quickly. In order to keep up with the plot, the supporting characters are forcibly upgraded in order to keep up with the plot. Moreover, there are too many water characters. Every skill is repeated once every level is reached. The ending is too sloppy and many pitfalls are not filled in before being promoted, such as (protagonist's team, small dragon, phoenix egg, etc.). The ending is too complete. It is recommended to abandon the book after reaching 80%.

Did someone else write this later? It made my three senses explode. It was a waste of time to watch it. The logic is not fluent. The protagonist awakens the skill of alchemy for no reason at the end? It's still a top-notch kind. At least mention the source. After giving it to Dongfang Yanran's father, he said that he made it, and then later said that he wanted to know who made it. Didn't he listen to what the co-author said? There is also the one named Su Keqing. After the protagonist went to the magic cave and came back, he changed his name to Lin Keqing? I thought I wrote it wrong, but when I looked at it later, I immediately corrected the mistake? Don't you even have a basic outline for writing an article? The character names can be spelled incorrectly, the problematic scenes are quite serious, and the protagonist is also a real fw. Someone who is obviously the king of the holy realm still has the system and the most powerful talent to defeat a female fairy king? Or it can be said that her skills are very strong, but when she and Yanran returned to their residence, they couldn't beat two people who relied on drugs to reach the god level. In the end, she didn't participate in the game and didn't directly upgrade to level 18? The rest of the story is completely unreasonable. At the end, the story of the two remaining people is gone. Lin Keer and the like are gone. Even the mentor who went to find him is gone. The dragon meat is gone, the phoenix egg is gone, and there is nothing. Including that organization with a thousand people, he just talked about it and took a bunch of prizes. The decorations are completely useless. The author didn't actually dig many holes in the early stage. Once the holes are filled in later, it can be written on. The first part is okay and the second part is almost unreadable. The main character is basically being ridiculed like a FW. If you spend time to scold me, it is better to read other books. Don't read this one, it's just a eunuch.

It's okay, but the ending is a bit sloppy 😂😂