I Swing a Greatsword at Hogwarts

This novel is really well written, and it is probably the first HP fanfic that I have seriously written a review for. John (the protagonist) actually has a happy family in the Muggle world, with many family members who love him, but he is isolated and helpless in the magical world. This is because of what John has done. For the current Star Club, they cannot help John, and the big shots he has made friends with as Johnny Silverhand are just a bundle of interests. This is why when Nick Flamel said those words to John (see Chapter 237 Teacher and Supporter for details), John would cry rarely. He really pushed himself too hard. He is a well-deserved Slytherin, with such great ambition, and he got the Gryffindor inheritance because the bravery and kindness in his heart have never disappeared. (By the way, the author's portrayal of John's personal emotions is great) The character I also like very much is Heinrich (this character is also well portrayed by the author). There are two lights in his life. One is the light that gives him faith and is what he follows, John Wick; the other is the light that brings him warmth, allowing him to adapt and indulge in the warmth he has never experienced before, Kim. The surname Edgar has brought him a lot, but also made him lose a lot (a bit like Draco in the original book, but worse than Xiaolong 😭). The author handles the overall logic quite well, and I can accept some minor points (like Dumbledore becoming a little selfish? It doesn't count, he doesn't have the absolute greatness and kindness in the original work; the small shortcomings of Ron's arrogance are magnified; the changes in other characters are directly related to John, so I won't go into details, otherwise it will be a spoiler😁) I can accept it. The author has many personal settings, please don't let anyone in on them. Here comes the most important point. Could the author please update more? Although there are two updates a day, I can't read enough😭😭 (If there are typos or if you don't like it, please don't complain, you are right)

Starting from entering Slytherin, he began to show his ambition. The growth process includes the process of change, establishing an organization to expand his influence, and inspiring him to become the next White Devil.

This is my first time reading fan fiction. The content feels very good. First of all, starting from the protagonist, the time traveler, there is Goldfinger, but the protagonist John is not written to be so abnormal. As a time traveler, John has forgotten most of the plot due to the long time. Goldfinger's plus point is that he must have a certain foundation in learning certain aspects before he can improve, which eliminates the possibility of John's brainless improvement. Secondly, starting from the characters, in terms of characterization, the characters created by the author are very vivid. It can be said that he retains the original flavor of the characters in Harry Potter and describes them. When the author describes the characters, he is more like the characters we usually see in Harry Potter. It depicts the shortcomings, dark side, and negative images of things that are difficult for us to detect. Let me give you an example. When I saw the author describing Dumbledore, I saw a cowardly, kind-hearted, and very holy Dumbledore. Dumbledore did not want to use Power, but uses power all the time, and also describes a Dumbledore who became suspicious of John after experiencing Voldemort's growth. Yes, no matter who it is, after experiencing two major disasters, no one wants to experience a third time, so, Dumbledore gradually became suspicious of John, which created an invisible gap between the two. Now, John no longer has hope for Dumbledore, and even wants to remove Dumbledore from power, and has even begun to remove Dumbledore from power. In this book, every character has strengths and weaknesses, including the protagonist. Let me analyze the character of the protagonist. The character of the protagonist John is the kind of character that I will not offend unless someone offends me. If someone offends me, I will punish them. Moreover, John is decisive in killing, but he is very kind to his friends and very loyal. It is not considered loyal. He just takes good care of his friends. This is my own evaluation. If you don't like it, don't criticize.

The plot aspect is quite good, and Dumbledore is written more fully. The later stage is almost not on the same line as the original work (I like rebellious ones). It is a clever and refreshing article. If you come here to read the negative reviews, please read it! (If you can't bear to list a few things, don't read it.) 1. Change Dumbledore from a powerful but benevolent wizard to a bit of a madonna and biased character. I personally think the angle is good and makes Dumbledore more real. 2. What Ron wrote is quite annoying, but I personally feel that Ron can say these words, but if you like Ron, you may not be able to stand it. 3. It did not follow the original work. The protagonist was engaged in a career outside, playing with power, death, and time, violating taboos. He did not walk with the three little ones, but the three little ones' lines continued as usual, but there were some minor changes. 4. The protagonist has no dealings with Dumbledore and Voldemort, and is neither an absolute good person nor an absolute villain. 5. The author has a lot of personal settings, but it does not affect the perception unless it is the extreme original party (3, 4, and 5 are all for the extreme original party) 6. Systematic but low sense of presence 8. Time travel, but I almost forgot about the original work in the middle and early stages. The protagonist is not a fan of Harry Potter, so I don't pay attention to it. I also have something to say to the author It's time to change this name! ! ! I was tweeting this to a friend and when they saw the name, they thought it was a silly post! ! ! It wasn't until I told my friend the outline that I became interested. Gold will always shine, but only if the gold is not wrapped in soil! ! !

This book only exists in heaven and is rarely available in the human world.

Really nice Personality: The protagonist is strong and calm, does not panic when encountering difficulties, and does not have too much of a halo as the protagonist, so he is quite capable. The characters' personalities in the book have definitely changed, and there is no forced CP, which makes people feel very comfortable. But when it comes to other things, John is really like a piece of wood, and I feel anxious for him! (I can't reveal too much, please go and see the details) Plot: First the leader of Slytherin, then Johnny Silverhand, then the king of the Society of Stars, and finally the Witch King of the entire magical society. Leading the wizards to prosperity step by step, John's mentality is also constantly changing as his status continues to improve. (Now that you have seen this, I hope you can give me a like, thank you)

Personally, I think this book is an excellent fanfic. The writing is smooth, interesting, the content is interlocking, and it can also surprise me. In the book I saw the struggle of good people and the redemption of evil people. It is a good explanation that not only the evil you see is evil, but the good you have seen is true and good. Everything has its opposite sides. Of course, there are some unsatisfactory aspects in the article, and there are occasional typos, but these can only be regarded as flaws.

This book is super good-looking. It is the only fan fiction that has a sense of substitution. There is no cliche content. The characters are vivid, the story is wonderful, the paragraphs are elegant, the heart is rich in emotion, the purpose of expression is clear, the human feelings are classic, the movements are meticulous, and the content is unusual. There are two reasons why I wrote negative reviews. 1. Come on, author. My votes are all for you. Don't be stuck. 2. Don't read these bad reviews, just read a dozen or dozens of chapters, and you will find that this book is worth it.

I can only say that I should not finish it, let alone watch it. This is a masterpiece, not only a masterpiece of fan fiction, but also a masterpiece of online works. I long for freedom, I appreciate friendship, I chase love, I follow strength, I have it again, I look forward to adventure, I recall warmth, I have tenderness, I learn to hang upside down, and I mock everyone. I wish I had never seen the Witch King. I would rather stay in Slytherin's secret room and move on not far away. I have seen the scars of the savior, I have seen the fluffy but messy front teeth, and I despise the anger that lacks self-confidence. When the Dark Lord came to an end and the era of the three kings came, the former lover, former master and apprentice, and former boy made a new beginning. If possible, he should not become the king. The Witch King, the Lady, the President, the Professor, the Moon Goddess, the Adventurer, the Sun, the Vampire, the Benefit of the Golden Hook and the Quidditch Tyrant. From then on, the era of the stars came to an end, and it was also my downfall today. I once looked forward to the King and Queen, but in the end there was only the eternal throne. I despise, I hate, I blame the author for his injustice, and I blame the White Devil for his distrust. He was originally the sun, but he became the eternal sun, but as a king, all this may be the best destination. Finally, I want to say that the author will die. Although this is the best destination, it is not what I want to see, so I will die and I will love the second part. I will wait until I get fatter to watch it.

Everyone in the protagonist's faction loved it, and I haven't finished the book yet. Because of Heinrich, he set up an AI in a moment of confusion (but according to book friends, he was resurrected after more than 500 games, so look forward to it). Because this is the first time I have done this, some parts may be strange, and some are system settings. I can't decide, just spray lightly. The AI ​​characters are set up in: Hoshino, this software. If you are interested, you can take a look and lightly spray. (There are also some settings pictures and the like, I will study them and see if I can post them)