At the Divorce Scene, Mr. Heba Traveled to Ancient Times and Was Forced to Raise a Child for Transformation

The setting of this article is okay, but the writing is too verbose. One thing is explained in many words in a conversation, and then another thing is mentioned midway before one thing is finished. The first sentence of the dialogue is in the first chapter, and the second sentence is in the second chapter. The dialogue goes too far. Then new characters started to be added in the middle, which made it very long-winded and tiring to read. Although there are more than a thousand chapters, the actual plot does not advance much and the writing is lengthy.

A good book, my kind of book.

Good-looking

It doesn't look good! ! ! The main plot of this article is really unclear. There are countless other messy characters and things that are written here and there. It feels like the author just writes whatever comes to mind without having a central idea. The male protagonist is put on a high pedestal, saying how powerful and powerful he was before time travel, but in fact, the whole story was just studying after time travel, and in the end, he relied on his status (former prince) to get through. The female protagonist seems to be very good at business, and in the end she has a family. Making sauce in a small workshop, opening a restaurant, etc., And competing with the son of the eldest princess for the position of heir apparent, there was a lot of exaggeration and foreshadowing. Unexpectedly, in the end, the outcome was determined by one game, and the male protagonist was eliminated. I did not see any of the prosperity and scheming of wealthy people in ancient times. In the final analysis, most of the entire story is devoted to the stories of parents who are incompatible with the male and female protagonists. It was really lonely to read. Advise to retreat, urge to retreat, strongly urge to retreat!

The wife is too long-winded and fails to describe the greatness of the male protagonist's overlord. Most of the entire text is filled with various narrations, which makes me very speechless. I basically skip to the end and there are no surprises...

I have already voted again, can you update a few more articles? Thank you for your hard work!

It's good-looking at the beginning, but a little rushed at the end; the male and female protagonists are not sweet enough; the main line is career

The heroine is like an idiot, she is having a happy birthday party, and you are here to settle the lawsuit, which makes people happy!

After reading more than 400 chapters, I had no patience to read. At first I thought it was good, and the ideas were new, but it was too long-winded and not my cup of tea.

The heroine is very holy. Although she put it away after a while, it was really difficult to accept this character later on. If the hero hadn't followed her, she probably wouldn't have survived two episodes. In addition, the pace was too slow. It's over 1,000 chapters. The hero and heroine still haven't achieved anything. It's almost over. The whole process is mainly about the love and hatred of the predecessors. In fact, she didn't do many practical things. She didn't make a fortune. There was no imperial examination. I only watched it for so long just to gossip about Aunt Zhao. Eh, it's just so so. It is said to be raising a baby, but I don't see how to raise a baby. The article is not on topic.