Outlaw

The plot is deeply moving and intense. Whether it is love or battlefield scenes, it makes readers feel passionate and excited. The author's writing style is good. I hope to continue

I like it very much. It breaks the traditional model. I like it.

Overall, I wanted to read it but also hated it. The framework is okay, but it's not that I can't finish it. The whole book is a slap in the face. Generally speaking, the boss is a god in the eyes of the younger brother. However, everyone around the male protagonist thinks he is not good. The pig's feet can be pushed aside, but it takes up too much discomfort when reading. The unpleasantness of the article can drive away a large number of readers, and there is always a kind of war. The feeling of collapse may be because the outline is not organized properly or it may be a problem with the details. In addition, the army behaves like a gangster, and the officials behave like fools. I suggest you not write about this aspect. Although pig's feet are crazy about people, if you don't care about the people around you, you will still lose points. For example, when Zi saw the pig's feet at the tomb of Marquis Wu, he thought that the pig's feet were stimulated. But if Zi insists, he will lose points if he continues to do so. Also, it is very uncomfortable to watch if the male and female protagonists do not communicate with each other in time. Whether it is the male and female protagonists or the elder and younger brothers, it is really uncomfortable to stay together if they are not in the same world. After complaining and praising, the clues are clear and it is good to peel off the cocoon.

Wonderful writing

I just like to see Xiao Beichen pretending to be cool. The author's Xiao Beichen completely fits the Chinese hero in my heart! I hope the author will update more quickly! Can't wait!

It's so annoying and the setting is messy. The empress is 6 years older than the male protagonist. In the 40th year of Daxia, the empress conquered Beiliang. Is the empress in her belly at this time?

Don't let Xia Mengyao, the male protagonist, have any more romantic feelings.

I just can't figure it out. The Empress can fight against the Supreme Qing Emperor for three years just after breaking through to the realm of land immortal. According to this plot, the Supreme Qing Emperor is not only a simple land immortal, but the earth immortal should be more than nine stars. Why can the empress compete with the Supreme Qing Emperor? What should she use to serve against him? Just rely on prophecy?

After reading the 100th chapter, I noticed that the author's pen name is missing a word (not)... In addition to pretending to be 13, a novel is forced to pretend to be 13 [Rotten wood cannot be carved]

The update speed is quite fast. Compact content worth reading