Magician, Magic Doctor, Useless Concubine from Another World

Author, I feel that your writing style is not very good. Why? I just read the first few chapters, and then I discovered that you always get the names of the characters wrong, and that your relationship is very complicated, and the language is a little unclear. Therefore, I can't understand what you want to express at all, and I can't understand what you are expressing. And today is a bit perfunctory. If you have read this book for a few years, I don't recommend you to read it, because it is really not good to read.

This is my first time writing, so I still have to give myself a good review. There are many problems, take your time to correct them.

After watching this, I only have one feeling: I urge you to update more.

The writing is okay, but there are too many redundant words and too many unnecessary repetitions. If and then, these two words are repeated so much that people can't bear to read any more.