A Prodigal Son from a Poor Family

It was going well in the beginning, but after more than 500 chapters, some martial arts people from Tianwaitian, Shanwaishan, and Qi Lian appeared. It was a novel that traveled back to ancient times. There was no mention of fantasy at all. Suddenly, it was really hard to follow, and it was really confusing.

Just typos and omissions

I would like to ask the author, Li Shihan's natal family is 500 miles away from Dawang Village. In the past few years, she often went back to her natal family to borrow money. How did she get there? Why is it so difficult to meet her now. The further you get to the back, the more water you get. The mud of online novels cannot hold up the wall.

The plot is compact and good-looking

I don't like to be sentimental, but I found out that in the end they all turned into studs, which was boring.

The whole back part is written in character dialogue, the vernacular text is too wordy, the storyline is very bland, and the content of 10 chapters is 100 words long. Very poor skills. Fighting bandits in the front, courting the court in the middle, and practicing martial arts and qi in the back. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. Doesn't the author have any ideas?

The plot is good, but the details are not delicate enough.

The content written by the previous writer was very interesting and attractive. However, at the end of the writing, the writer changed and made lots of typos. It was inconsistent, without any literary or intellectual reserves. Without an outline, it was just like writing whatever came to mind. The time-travel drama was suddenly changed to Cultivation of Immortals for no reason. There was no foreshadowing in the front, and the writing was so bad that I had no desire to follow it. Except for the good-looking words at the beginning, the rest was completely written randomly with lots of typos.

What people fear most is dependence and laziness!

It looks good without using your brain.