On the Day of the Blind Date: I Met the Richest Man in the World and Asked Me to Get His Certificate.

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It's pretty good, but there are a lot of typos

Very pretty Very good, good

Wonderful~

Please update soon, I really like watching it.

After reading this work, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of Mengniu Sour Yogurt, held it tightly in my hand, carefully recalled the plot of this article, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy. Gradually it began to rain lightly, and my vision began to blur... I don't know if it was because I was crying or because the rain was too heavy. Maybe it was all, my heart became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I slowly opened the window and shouted out the window, "What the hell is this!" ! ?

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It's hard to comment. To be honest, there are a lot of typos, the seniority is messed up, the characters are confused and rambling, the protagonist's emotions are drawn out for too long, the ending is hasty, and the protagonist's portrayal is not full enough. How to confess to the heroine is not mentioned at the end. This is very important, it is the key to the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and it should be rewritten. For the shaping of the female supporting role, it is a finishing touch, he is very good.

The more I read, the more speechless the author became. A boss who has been running a profitable business for many years wrote that he was so brainless that he took out important business funds for loans and ignored the purchase of a billion-dollar villa and a million-dollar luxury car. I saw brother and sister interacting and fighting, and I was speechless when I wrote about how a CEO-level figure has such low emotional intelligence.

It's a bit unfinished. The plot is too forced.