I Support the Whole Family by Opening a Restaurant

This is a book that combines the theme of traveling back to the country and opening a store in another world. This theme is rare and very novel. The author's literary skills are also good, and some plot descriptions are very sad and can make readers immerse themselves in the story. The heroine traveled to the continent of Oma for some reason and became an elf princess whose country had perished, that is, a prisoner of war. It was a hellish start. Fortunately, she has a system with nefarious intentions to exploit. She started her journey to open a store in many worlds, and used the proceeds to solve her real-life predicament. The process of planning step by step to escape from the clutches of the devil and gain freedom is very difficult. The heroine is very smart and perseverant. She can be cruel to herself, but she is also soft-hearted and kind-hearted. She always maintains a reverence for life. Restoration will involve bloodshed and casualties, but she maintains goodwill towards the people at the bottom. The heroine is a very calm person, she can always quickly collect her emotions and find solutions to problems. She is confident, bright, sunny and lovely. She is the darling of nature. She does not let other people's emotions affect her and separates her own emotions. While preserving her people, she plans to restore the country at all costs, even if she uses herself as a weapon, emotions as bait, or even if she loses her life. She is committed to becoming the most insidious and cunning elf, even if she is afraid of losing the elf's nobility. She made full use of herself, and she achieved her goal as she wished. This book has a male protagonist. But the emotional lines are not described too much. The career line of the heroine is the main line, the story lines of other supporting characters are supplementary, and the emotional line is the spice. (Maybe the author is not very good at writing emotional dramas, so there is a little contradiction, which will make the heroine emotionally separated, but the emotional separation of the heroine is considered a need of the plot, so it is okay) The plot of this book is relatively novel and attractive, but the emotional aspect is a bit mishandled, but it can be resolved. For example, when Wyatt and the heroine had a decisive battle, they were very contradictory. Wyatt was a child controller, but he was a seventh-level monster and had experienced ups and downs. According to the fact that when he first found out that the heroine wanted to take away his son, he did not kill him. After the misunderstanding was explained clearly, it should not happen again. Later, the conflict between the heroine and him suddenly deepened and developed to the point where he wanted the heroine to die. , And his tribe needs the help of the heroine, and the author's subsequent plot does not require the heroine to break with this Warcraft tribe. Regarding the heroine's near death and subsequent development, even if there is little Hayden to coexist with it, it seems too light-hearted. It is better to not have such a big conflict at the beginning to deepen the hatred and leave room for redemption, so that it seems reasonable and reasonable. There are several other places that have this problem, such as the third and second princes, as well as Fen, and some people who plot against her. They all have the problem of handling things lightly. Moreover, the article ends in a hurry, and there is no ending for these people. Many plots are not detailed at the end, but are just brushed off. Many pitfalls have not been filled yet. There is also not enough foreshadowing of the heroine's relationship. It seems unreal that the heroine has loved the eldest prince, and this love should not exceed the heroine's love for Yi, because the article has foreshadowed the origin and portrayal of the heroine's feelings for Yi, but there is not enough foreshadowing to portray the eldest prince's feelings, because it was used from the beginning, just She fantasizes about falling in love with the eldest prince, just for show. Even if she puts in real feelings, it's definitely not much. It's definitely not to the point where the heroine will be buried with him after her death. At most, it's just a sigh of relief, because she has someone she likes before. Even if that love is restrained, it still exists. The human heart is small and can't accommodate two people. Also, the progress of the heroine He Yi is too slow and too tame. There are also some flaws in Platinum's love. It can be a feeling of admiration and admiration, but it is not the kind of love. The heroine can conquer this thorn with her own strength and personality charm, and admiration without the slightest desire is more suitable. There is not always love between men and women. Friendship, respect for the elders, admiration for the peers, protective feelings for the younger generation, etc., These can all reflect the personality charm of the protagonist. In life, it is impossible to just love. Family and friendship are indispensable, but they may be deep or shallow. Love is just a seasoning, and love will eventually slowly transform into family affection. You have me, and I have you. Love accounts for too much and is easily monotonous and unreasonable. Love that violates ethics is especially sinful. Others are okay, the author's writing style is good, and the expansion of the writing should be better, but the connection in some places is not very good. It would be better if the heroine's step-by-step goals are written clearly and clearly, so that readers can know more clearly and understand it more deeply. Overall, this article is good. It is suitable for those who are in a book shortage. It is much better than those articles that are boring to read and a pity to discard. I hope the author will have better works in the future (✧◡✧)

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The writing is good, but the word count is too serious

The writing is poor, the content is not that good, and the heroine is average

I don't know how to describe it. It's a bit depressing and makes people look stupid.

It was quite interesting, but the revenge was not written in detail and it ended too quickly. Every detail of the scene is well written, and the characters are quite vivid.