Dressed as a Farmer's Sister from the Four Gangsters

I thought it was a cool article. The killer soul passage written earlier was quite refreshing, but it stopped working in Chapter 38. The best relatives did not regard the heroine's family as human beings. The heroine later served the best food and drinks. Moreover, the author had a huge problem that he didn't understand. The heroine was removed from the family tree. In ancient times, the heroine was removed from the family tree. People in the genealogy are disaffiliated, not separated. The author uses the factual dismemberment while talking about family separation. He uses the method of family separation to write the heroine, and always writes the heroine as a virgin. After seeing this, I don't want to read it. I hate the novel about the Virgin licking the dog the most. Reading a novel about the Virgin will only make people feel unhappy, so I have to abandon the article!

He boasts that the heroine is such a powerful killer. If she was really powerful, she would not have received a lunch box in her previous life, and now she has traveled and been reborn into ancient times that have gone back more than a thousand years to mess around. Rather than saying that the heroine is a killer, it is better to say that she is a funny and conspicuous person. She has good things but bad things everywhere. When something goes wrong, she only beeps and fights without solving the problem. She is in and out with men every day and almost goes to bed. She skips a little bit and then gives up.

The writing style is very comfortable and I can keep reading. I hope there will be more chapters. It's not enough.

Beautiful, well written

Nice

I feel like I can't write anymore. Many things don't add up. The ending is very sudden and it feels like it ends in an anticlimax.

To be honest, it doesn't look good, it's frustrating.

Being exterminated is not a family separation. When the heroine's family is exterminated, they should be weaned off from the master's grandfather. However, the master's family tried every means to go to the heroine's house to fight in the autumn breeze. The heroine also said that the bones were broken and the tendons were connected... I couldn't stand it anymore.

The author's thinking is distorted