Three Kingdoms: I, Ma Su, Kill Zhang He Instantly at the Beginning

It turns out you are the light It's fireworks on the sea It's the firefly in summer And I will always Keep chasing your light I want to hold you countless times I want to hold you tight countless times After all, you are the galaxy that I cannot touch in this life

Overall, it's pretty good. Although it's systematic, it's not exaggerated. From the beginning of the journey, two major events, Jieting and Ziwu Valley, have been reversed. There are courage and strategy along the way, passionate battles, overall planning, daily relaxation, and the love between children. It makes sense logically, and the writing is smooth and comfortable to read! There are also many unreasonable things in the article. It's a novel, so just relax! I hope the author will update more

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It's well written and has a solid writing skills. I look forward to working hard to update it.

When Thousand Stone Gong appeared, I knew this book was ruined. The author had no common sense. One stone weighs almost 120 jins according to the calculation of the late Han Dynasty. Let's round up the whole number to 100 jins. A thousand-stone bow is equivalent to one hundred thousand jins. Hahahaha, let's not talk about whether there are such awesome materials and craftsmanship, and a bow that can be pulled with a hundred thousand pounds of strength, who are you going to use it? Sun Wukong's golden cudgel weighs only about 10,000 kilograms. If the protagonist has such strength, why should he join the Three Kingdoms?

The first point: the protagonist's IQ is sometimes online and sometimes not. He sold 3 taels of salt in Shu and Han, but it was only 1 tael and 5 at the border of Shu and Wei. Why did he delay it for two months because he was afraid that the Cui family would be suspicious of selling it too early? When he summoned the trap camp in the first city of Wei, he told the five people named Huang that it was his secret. At the beginning, he told Zhuge Liang that it was given by the immortal and changed there. It was really uncomfortable to watch. Second point: The supporting characters were severely reduced in strength and intelligence. The scene when Zhao Yun was surrounded was too fake. The five father and son were killed by Zhao Yun alone. But in your case, Zhao Yun and his son brought 10,000 horses together and only 1,000 people were left? The strength has dropped too low. The protagonist asked Ma Fu what time it was, and Ma Fu said, "Is he asking about the time?" But it was so awesome that it made people's heads hurt. Earlier, I saw the protagonist in a daze and directly said who he was without speaking, which was offensive. The third point: The characters are confusing. Ma Su was in his 30s at the time, and had a wife and children. Ma Su and Zhuge Liang also said this before he failed to guard the street pavilion and was beheaded. Guan Yu's daughter was named Guan Yunping. Huang Zhong had no daughter. Huang Zhong's son died when Huang Zhong was in his 50s. It is recommended to read the comments before considering clicking in. Welcome to debate.

Not bad, worth a look!

It's good and you can read it, but the number of words is a little short. Please update it, the protagonist will dominate the world.

Just feel good and that's it

Very good. It sounds good to me. The plot is exciting and vivid. It sounds good to me. I kept listening and couldn't stop.