The Tale of Consort Shu of the Qing Palace

There were a lot of typos. I was confused at the end.

It looks good, but sometimes there are typos

There are a lot of typos, and some of the arranged chapters are not connected. One moment it was said that the Fourth Master was recorded in the name of the deceased Concubine Tong, and the next it was said that it was in the name of the Queen. Suddenly, another Concubine Tong appeared, who was the late Queen's sister, and the Fourth Master was recorded in the name of this Concubine Tong. It's a mess, and what's more, a time traveler wouldn't understand anything?

Some characters' backgrounds don't match up front and back, but they look okay.

The heroine is really hard to explain. The palace maids around her are not well managed. She doesn't know the protector when something happens, let alone warns her, so she makes her own decisions. The heroine herself is always making mistakes and can't stand up at all. She has no brains to return the memory of the goldfish when something happens. What the fourth elder brother just told him was turned around and left by Dulu... She can't protect herself at all. She doesn't know anything, is afraid of nothing, and dares nothing... No wonder she can only be a concubine.

Um, I feel confused just looking at it. What the hell is a dormitory manager suddenly here?

It's quite chaotic, here and there, it makes my head buzz.

The plot should be good, but unfortunately there are many typos.

It feels like one short story after another, and each chapter is not connected.

The content is a bit confusing. Kangxi knew all about the heroine's past, and then there was another person named Yinzhen.