World Cup: from Championship to Golden Ball

It's a bit graphic

If you don't understand football, don't write nonsense. What the hell are you writing about?

Dichlorvos production plant

He is always narrating, always falling behind by two goals, and the protagonist is always a fool. Except for playing football with convulsions, everything else is arranged, he is obeyed, and he is not afraid of being eaten. No bones are left.

Just leave it that way, it's not good at all. There are more than 90 pictures. The beginning is okay. I can only say that the creativity is good. The next 40 or so chapters look very depressing and not good at all. I gave it a chance and I really can't stand it anymore.

It doesn't sound good, was it written by a novice author?