The Eldest Son's Personal Maid

There are laughs and tears throughout the text, and occasionally there are some minor mistakes. What made me feel the most distressed in this article was the male supporting actor Kim Min-ok. At first I thought he was just a slut, and thought he was probably cannon fodder. But I didn't expect that he was given an affectionate script about the return of the prodigal son, and he kept silently giving without going astray. Then at the end, there are still some holes that have not been filled in. Even the supporting characters who have more important roles except the male and female protagonists did not explain any follow-up, which is a bit regretful.

It's another work that starts with a start but ends with a tail. The heroine's character is inconsistent before and after. As other book friends said, she becomes inexplicably stronger later on. After the hero comes back from trouble, another small story begins, and then ends in shock.

Very nice! It's just that the ending was a little rushed, and the endings of some people were not explained. It's a pity that the four young people who were once high-spirited never reunited.

The first 50 chapters focus on the male protagonist's scheming. Very nice to look at. The middle part, about the heroine's revenge, is also very interesting. But the male protagonist no longer has the original scheming plan. He deliberately elevated the heroine too much. These are all regrets.

Personally I think it looks pretty good

In the story of the girl, the male and female protagonists are both wise, but after arriving in the capital, those people from Fengyang disappeared. It is a pity that Jin Minyu, the prodigal son, turned back, and Mr. Zhang, who silently helped, how come there is no follow-up to these people? At least give it a try!

As I write this, I stand up and sing, and I really fall in love. Later, there are Mr. And Mrs. Smith, with a hammer here and there. Is this style popular now? I feel so lonely.

There are too many typos, the overall story description is too simple, and the ending is too hasty.

It's pretty, but it's a bit short, and I'm a bit reluctant to part with it! I like this novel so much 😍

The previous plot was okay, but it was inexplicable when I looked at it. The heroine suddenly became powerful. It was too ridiculous.