Take a Divine Insect Around the World

The protagonist has a brain problem. There are more stupid times than smart ones. Just like Leng Feng, there was no need to worry about him at first. It is necessary to be a brother with him. That Leng Feng couldn't help the protagonist at all. I ignored the Leng Feng at first and the protagonist improved very quickly. Not that much hassle. But because the protagonist is so old, he insists on being a brother with Leng Feng. In the end, there was a series of troubles. It's too easy to get emotional. It's okay to have feelings. But not too much.

Make people feel reality

It's okay to be a novice Shuangwen, but the relationship comes too suddenly, from strangers meeting for the first time to brothers who live and die in an instant. There is no logic at all, and the subject matter is very good. It would be much better to add some foreshadowing to this emotional line, such as the savior, the kindness from many years ago, etc. Because the emotional line is too sudden, there is no sense of empathy when reading.

Can write carefully and make few mistakes. The plot is very reasonable and can attract readers. The protagonist has an aura.

Much like a fairy tale.

It's okay to take a look. Keep up the good work.