Cultivation of Immortality Through Sand Sculpture, System Is Crazy

To comment, I read Chapter 85 before I went to the Fairy Fighting Conference. It was really good-looking and sometimes very funny. There was also the scene where Murong An asked Yusu at the end, have you ever loved me? Before, he had decisively answered no, never. I was really pleased with the whole story. I really knew how to get back together, and it also involved the literature of substitutes. Hahahaha, I was delighted. Of course, the heroine is also quite funny in some parts, and involves a lot of jokes. I am the one from Yunnan, so I have a deep impression on her. Okay, I'm here first because I read the review and the ending was not good, so I'll record it first. It was completely ok before chapter 85 and I'll record it for you when I have a chance.

I don't want to describe it as a bad ending. But it's really a pity to be cut in half. The author's skills in writing books are very strong, and his writing style is very friendly and easy-going. This article is more of a sandbox, but it is not simply funny, it is quite profound. Daily life is easy, and the author has learned from a master. Just from the first half of the story, if there is enough time in the second half, the characters will definitely be more fleshed out and deeper. The plot is not cliché, with ups and downs and new ideas. Judging from the foreshadowing laid by the author in the previous article, if the last 1/4 can be connected with the front to form a coherent and harmonious main plot line, Bu Zhan will definitely be an excellent work. The ending was too hasty and required 400,000 words to be completed, which left many pitfalls in the second half. The plot was slightly confusing, some characters were not fleshed out enough, and the details needed to be improved, which is also an issue that needs attention. Those who mind are protected from lightning. But compared to the common novels on the market such as rebirth through books, tribulations, female supporting characters, etc., The content is novel. I personally think that the front alone is worth a look and a smile. Ten years later Based on the excellence of the first half of the article, it shouldn't be so popular. This book is worth it (ps: I've thrown all my votes into it!)

The heroine Ning'an appears to be wearing a book, but is actually an ancient true god. The gods in the Qinghe era were debauched, causing the world to be devastated. The heroine could not bear this tragic situation in the world, stood with the world, and sacrificed herself to destroy this era. There are many hidden lines in the article, such as the two brothers are one body and have two souls. It is a pity that these hidden lines were not completed because the article was cut in half. It is really a pity. The author wrote it really well. It is a pity that I could not read it earlier (´;;`). This article is really funny. The male protagonist also has his own identity, which is different from the female protagonist. He is also a god. On the surface, the male protagonist failed to overcome the tribulation and entered the body of the demon king, turning into a little fox. He was also named Xiaohong by the female protagonist (the male protagonist will come out of the fox's body later). It is worth reading, and the whole text is not abusive (except for the fact that it is cut in half, but this abuse does not abuse the male and female protagonists●●)

The writing is messy, the preface does not match the postscript, and I think it is humorous, but in fact it is very embarrassing.

The heroine doesn't play by the clichés, she's very imaginative and very funny, but the ending is fast forward.

I am so embarrassed when some authors try to express humor, with only one or two laugh points (these two laugh points may be the reason for my low laugh point). I have read Chapter 13 so far. The fox scratches the child, the heroine attacks the bear parent, the original heroine speaks out to the heroine, and then they start to sit down and fight each other! ! Don't you care about Xiong's parents? There is no mention in the article whether the Bear parents left or not. Could it be that the Bear parents just stayed angry and watched the heroine and the others argue with each other, then sat down to argue with each other, and then discussed what to gain? Leaving aside this matter for now, where is the humor in the fact that the heroine handed the original hero a glass of fox's "foot-washing water" to drink? Why did the cannon fodder in the book, the second male lead, start laughing?

Gaga is a good-looking movie, with a cunning female protagonist and a tsundere male protagonist. You can read it in one sitting, and there are some scenes that made me laugh so hard that my stomach hurt. I recommend it to those who like to read sweet stories.

It was good-looking, but it ended too quickly. Come on, the author.

Too little

The heroine is pretty