First Talisman

It's a little sloppy, right?

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Really highly recommended! ! The female protagonist Yun Chaoge, a talisman master, meets the male protagonist at the beginning. The male protagonist Gu Loulan is a famous figure in the mainland above. She was "betrothed" (forgive me for using this word) by Chaoge Mama to Chaoge. They were actually childhood sweethearts, but they were forced to separate due to the rift in time and space. Loulan even attached one of her soul to Chaoge, that is, Yunqing, because she was worried about Chaoge. Finally, the two met in the middle continent. (Maybe I don't understand it well, sorry for that) To be honest, it is a pity that this book ended like this because the results were not very good. The plot is well-organized, and many foreshadowings that are almost forgotten will appear later and even catch people off guard. The stealing plot at the end didn't make me feel any Mary Sue, I even felt happy and "she deserves it". She deserves to be admired by everyone (I am not involved in the drama! I am normal! I express my feelings!) How does it feel to have several difficult feelings in one book: Mu Qianxue: Although she is here, she has never been taken seriously by anyone, and people even subconsciously ignore her. She is a descendant of the Penglai clan. The Penglai people are all good-looking, and can even be called magical, but they were almost wiped out... Right and Wrong: (The author said) He was finally lost in 'right and wrong', called 'right and wrong', but he also died because of 'right and wrong'... He is the Holy Son of the Temple, the Temple is dirty, he is the Holy Son of the Temple, should he stick to his true heart, or compromise with the numbness of everyone in the Temple... Li Kuo: "'Thank you', thank you for helping me to be freed..." He is from Shenzuo. He supported Chao Ge when he was in the sea, but he is a spy after all... (Why only 3? My brain capacity is not enough. Forgive me for not remembering the plots and endings of all the characters) The author is super cute (I want to use this adjective) and every time a reader misunderstands the plot or has questions, he will give a reply very seriously! Really, why is such a good author not so popular! Once it became popular, I became a long-time fan (bushi) Come on! (Then full of desire to survive)

It's not good to read. Reading this book is like a piece of cake. I insisted on reading Chapter 88 and I really couldn't stand it anymore. To summarize a few points that I can't stand: 1. There are a lot of typos, and many sentences are not fluent. I know every word, and when put together, people can understand it, but I don't understand what I want to express. 2. The male protagonist is set up to be a pretty awesome boss, and his identity is the same, but he started to like the heroine when he first met her, but he always calls her a sister, and he loves and dotes on the heroine so much. He is especially jealous of all kinds of jealousies, jealous of the heroine's good sisters, jealous of the heroine's brother, and jealous of the horse the heroine rides. 3. The heroine is set to be ignorant about love, but she understands the love of her best friend very well. She said that she regards the hero as a younger brother, but she often holds hands, hugs, and even kisses. His brother asked her what she meant to the male protagonist, and she said that she only regarded him as a younger brother. This heroine gives me a feeling of authority and dignity. 4. The heroine has a very awesome mother, all kinds of powerful forces, and is very rich, but these are only given to the heroine, not to the heroine's brother. If the heroine does not travel through time and the heroine's original body dies, then these powers and money will be regarded as nothing and will not be given to the heroine's brother. This shows that the heroine's brother is very talented and capable. These settings of parental inheritance forces only recognize the heroine. This setting is very unreasonable. I feel that it is specifically to highlight the specialness of the heroine, and everyone else is a foil. 5. In the play, as long as she is not the villain, everyone likes the heroine and dotes on her. The emperor dotes on her, her brother dotes on her, and the princess dotes on her. When the emperor and princess find out that the heroine framed the prince, the emperor and princess are not angry at all, and they are still very good to the heroine. Most of them are just doting on her without thinking. Feeling 6. The plot is really boring, like keeping a running account. Let me give you an example: "I got up around today, brushed my teeth and washed my face, had breakfast, then went to the company to clock in, and did Japan with my colleagues. Then I had a meeting with my boss and colleagues to discuss my work this week. The plan is to express their own opinions and plans, and then go to eat snail noodles with colleagues after get off work at noon, buy a glass of juice on the way back, then take a lunch break, read with colleagues for lunch, and then play Werewolf together. This is the culture of our company, Wolf After the murder, I continued to work. During the work, some clients came to me for trouble, and I scolded them all. During this period, other clients kept praising me for being beautiful and admiring me..." That's more or less what it means. Anyway, I really can't stand it anymore, it's quite boring.

When the 100th person comments ✌✌. Although this is a novel that was recently released. The male patron Gu Loulan is a little puppy (before recovery) and a little wolfdog (after recovery). Can be milk or wolf. The author is also a very fond fan. Most of the time, if there is an error in your comment, the author will reply and modify it, and will also like the approved comment. The author is very fond of fans. You won't lose money if you invest in shares, and Chinese people don't deceive Chinese people🇨🇳.

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Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was a fantasy novel about cultivating immortals. In fact, it is more like a novel about otaku fighting. Except for the occasional mention of things related to cultivation, most of it is just a bunch of intrigues and otaku fights.

Very nice! Big cheers for the author!

When I first started watching it, I felt that I didn't like the part where the heroine and the hero were together. I felt it was a bit forced to let the readers know that they are the hero and heroine. Then there was the heroine who kept saying that he was his younger brother but his behavior said otherwise. The author summed up all of this by saying that the heroine is a straight woman, but I feel that modern girls do not have no sense of boundaries even if they are straight. After that, the heroine preaches peaceful methods and so on. It is really uncomfortable when I read it. The heroine is so hard-working about her own abilities. I don't see how hard she works. The author of Sea of Death also mentions it in one sentence. After that, he fights with the heroine in the front, and the heroine always loses, but she says that she has to work hard, and she still loses later. After that, the heroine is made to be the referee. I feel that it is really inconsistent. This is a cultivation book. Shouldn't the heroine work hard to improve herself? The heroine's biggest trump card is Fu, but the description in the book makes me feel that the heroine has been resting on her laurels ☹️ In Haicheng, the heroine suddenly came out to be a referee or something in the inn, including judging later. It made me think that the heroine is a virgin who is not capable enough and has to be a referee. There is also an emotional line between the male and female protagonists. In the spiritual veins, the heroine's series of attitudes are also very inconsistent. The more I look at it, the more unsightly I feel.