Second in the World

Gave me a source of daydreams

The first part is okay, but the second part, "The Immortal World", is so messy that it makes me confused.

It's not even a novice, it's suitable for primary school students.

Rubbish. You don't have the strength and you go around pretending to be cool.

Nice

This novel is really speechless, is it going to end now?

Childish

It's so rubbish, so many people who wanted to kill him were let go one by one. I don't have the strength to show off everywhere. Obviously he would repair the magic weapon from the beginning and not hold it for self-defense. If not, the protagonist would have died long ago.

The front is okay, but the back is boring.

Haha, a nonsense sentence can last a chapter or two.