White Dragon Comes Out of the Horse Fairy

Generally speaking, it is good, but there are some flaws in the practice in Putuo Temple. First of all, the protagonist practices in the temple as a layman, so he cannot be named Shi. Shi is a surname exclusive to ordained monks. Secondly, those who have a Dharma name should have received the three refuges and five precepts before they have a Dharma name. This Dharma name will not change your original surname, so the Dharma name given to the protagonist by the master in this article is not as good as Dharma.

Northeasterners see the Northeast as a fairy

Xiangping is now Liaoyang City, Liaoning Province. I was born and raised in Liaoyang. The place of Taizi River is real.

There are no major problems in the whole book, except that the ending is too hasty and leaves a hole unfilled, and there is no problem with the plot. The plot is very real. I am just a Northeastern person. I can't say that I am familiar with Ma Xian. I don't know, but I have come into contact with them, and there is also a Baojiaxian in my family. I read and read the book reviews before reading this book. There are a few things that I would like to talk about and suggest that the heroine part should be deleted. There are too few scenes for the heroine in the whole story, so I would like to suggest that you go and read it. Naoshuang article, or Danmei, I am convinced by this brother. The article has clearly written that the male protagonist is afraid of implicating the female protagonist, and the male protagonist does not have the strength to protect the female protagonist; another brother said that there are too many garbled characters, and this novel Qimao may not have the copyright, which may be caused by the direct transfer, or the author may have written it too realistically, deliberately; another brother said that the story is not interesting, I feel that he has not finished reading it, this novel is very real, and has great twists.

What I wrote above is okay, but there are a few places where I seem to lack common sense: 1. I remember that there was a place where it was written that Audi A6L drives in first gear, manual transmission A6L? 2. There is no direct flight from Yanji to Nanjing. 3. Failure to report the information is a crime of cover-up, and Xiao Liu's normal end would not be much better. 4. The relationship between the protagonist and Tudouzi does not advance the plot. Wouldn't it be better to remove it? And there is that little apprentice. 5. Didn't Chen and Li Shidong say that there were two people behind the scenes, one was Tian Dawei and the other was Lao Liu? How come Tian became a good person again? The overall writing is quite exciting, there are not many exciting parts, and the final battle is too hasty. Since you can easily recruit people from the police station, is this all you have?

It's cool to see the thief, the protagonist is the protagonist, it's so awesome, but the thing about him having a name in the underworld

There is no other reason for giving good reviews, just because I am interested in Chumaxian (☆_☆)

The story is quite interesting, but there are too many typos.

The ending is too fast. It feels like it ended hastily before it was finished. Could it be that I couldn't continue writing?

Are you the author of "The Taoist Priest of the Earth"? The writing is quite humorous, but sometimes it's a bit too bragging. I can see the shadow of the "Taoist of the Earth" in it.