Before Ascension

The writing is a bit ugly. But I want to comfort the author and give him a good review.

It's not easy to write so much, so I give it a neutral rating. Because he only inherited the memory of the Immortal Lord, the personality of the protagonist is not that of an Immortal Lord. It is understandable that he slowly adapts to the laws of the immortal world. But it seems that the main line of the story is almost guided by the beauties of various identities. The description of the emotional journey of the beauties is not as good as the description of the beauties. The plot is too strong (even like a licking dog who likes to flirt with women). In addition, the description of each realm is a bit confusing.

Unfinished When the Two Worlds Mountain was broken, didn't Ye Chen send his seven women to the world of immortality? Why didn't it appear later? Didn't Ye Chen promise to protect them and then forget about them after reincarnation? And his biological father and mother didn't appear later? Ye Chen's sister from his last reincarnation did not appear either. The plot after the Two Realms Mountain was broken was a bit messy. The plot went too fast. In the finale, Ye Chen was the Great Luo Jinxian, and Jiuyou Zhengyu had not yet mastered the skills. It was mentioned in the book that there was a saint above the immortals. When the last enemy appeared, the saint did not appear?

I saw several novels where the male protagonist is named Ye Chen... Why⊙ω⊙

The whole article is full of childish slaps in the face, as well as sinister and greedy characters and environments, showing the author's inner inferiority and darkness. I advise you to put down your butchery pen, read more beautiful articles, travel to famous mountains and rivers, and cleanse your mind. Otherwise, sooner or later, you will become obsessed with writing and waste your life as a human being. (Can't stand it anymore, give up reading)

This kind of urban immortality theme is so poorly written! It's all the same, the protagonist is called a master when he has some strength, a big shot always appears and asks the protagonist to go to the hospital, and the protagonist will encounter conflicts wherever he goes. I have lived for decades without encountering a few conflicts with anyone. The protagonist is like a strong magnet. He is either fighting for a car with a certain young man, a house with a certain young man, or a private room with a certain gangster. It makes me want to vomit.

This is a novel about the combination of inheritance and rebirth. From the moment the protagonist receives the inheritance, he fights all the way, keeps practicing, has constant opportunities, never gives up, and can avert danger every time he encounters it. But the protagonist is hesitant about feelings. He can't even protect the people around him. He has to wait until he loses it before he can cherish it. Although it is a harem story, some girls clearly like you. You don't agree or refuse, and you keep wasting their girls until there is no ending in the end. So either don't write so much, or just accept them all. At least everyone can have a good ending. It used to be pretty good, but now I don't feel that good. The first part was okay, but in the second half I felt that the Vietnam War was too outrageous, so I'll give it a good review! There are still some foreshadowings that have not been written out, especially the finale. If there is a second part, I hope to write out the rest.

What the hell? It's so completely messed up.

This Zhao Mengyao is such a bitch! You are always so self-righteous. If I were the protagonist, I would have been slapped to death.

Overall, it's a good book.