Xiaoyao Daoxian

Among free novels, this is a rare novel. The author has grasped every aspect of the work just right. There are very few novels that make me insist on seeing the end. This is one of them, keep up the good work!

Is the protagonist too trashy? It takes so many moves to kill someone who is four or five levels lower than you, and he talks a lot of nonsense.

It's beautiful. It's very beautiful. Don't write it next time. Break it into pieces. Break it into pieces completely. What the hell are you writing?

Not bad, I can write more later

The women are always written to be very strong. I don't like to read this kind of thing. If you encounter this kind of chapter, just jump to it. Can you write the male protagonist to be stronger?

Too much talk, too much nonsense

The realm is not written clearly enough. A realm can be divided into elementary, intermediate and advanced levels. There are half steps, peak, invincible, supreme, and more than ten levels. . . So messy

The theme and plot are not bad, but the novel is written with literary flair like The Lazy Wife's Feet Binding, which means it wastes too much words.

Written in a mess

There are so many people commenting on this book that it is good. Have you never read a good book, or do you not understand what is good and what is bad? This book has too much bullshit, it's so bad