Martial Arts Universe

The ending was too bland. I didn't learn about my life experience in the lower world, and I didn't see my father at the end. You left Han Shuixian in the cold, she is your first relative, even though she worked for you, she didn't have any money before your ascension. Too much chauvinism lowers the status of women! Are all large war enemies made of paper? There are typos, so be careful! Overall very good

Haven't watched it yet, just to be the first to comment

I've almost finished reading, and I have a few comments to make. First, the women in the protagonist of this novel are all too bad, which I personally think is a big flaw. Second, training is divided into martial arts and Taoism, but Taoism is written in very general terms. From beginners to top masters, there are only a few simple tricks. Third, the age and the speed of cultivation can easily reach hundreds or thousands of years. The protagonist has practiced for more than ten years and surpassed others for thousands of years. The halo is too heavy and the plot is not exciting enough. Fourth, the plot becomes more ordinary in the later stages, and the exciting places that could have been written are simply touched upon, such as the Blood Lord. Overall, this is a novel that becomes less and less interesting the more I read it.

To be honest, this book is really average. The protagonist's aura is too obvious and he is invincible. He has not suffered any major setbacks. The protagonist makes people feel that his eyes are too high. There are no casualties in large-scale battles. It's too outrageous and boring.

This novel is very well written. Unlike other novels, one of the friends laughs at the male protagonist before the fight. It is a very good and refreshing novel. Good luck to the author💪

The author has a bit of imagination, but his writing is sloppy and his skills are insufficient. The performance in big scenes is weak. The stallion character is very relatable. Ten times the amount of water completely contradicted the good impression of the imagination. The author has no ethics!

The author's thoughts and wishes are very good, and the life he longs for should be like that. The protagonist has a fearless and brave heart!

The plot is exciting. The sentences are fluent.

The author has a dark mind

Mixing all the sects around