Taboo Folk Talk

"Basic hand, expert hand, ordinary hand" are the three terms of Go. Basic moves refer to regular moves that conform to chess principles; expert moves refer to unexpectedly subtle moves; ordinary moves refer to moves that seem reasonable but usually result in damage from the overall perspective. But even though I am so proficient in chess skills, when I saw my sister, I seemed to have lost my way. I felt that my chessboard had undergone earth-shaking changes, becoming elusive and unable to start. How to play this chess move, how to play it. When I spent an entire night thinking about the reason, I looked at my own battle-scarred hands and thought of my sister's charming smile, and finally figured out why. The day I met my sister, I had that heart-pounding feeling. It turns out that there is another kind besides the three "basic skills, expert skills, and common skills". That is, I want to see your diligently renewed hands.

The plot is okay, but there are too many exaggerations in places that readers don't really want to see. Readers are eager to know the outcome of some things, but the writing process is too cumbersome, and some things in the article are repeated over and over again. The writing is good, but could be more refined. It's just that the update is a bit slow. Come on😊

The early chapters are good, but the later chapters are not so good.

When I read Chapter 17, I really couldn't stand it anymore. He started out well but then got worse and worse. The male protagonist in the background is a rural boy and a high school student. I don't know where he comes from with such high arrogance. Where is his confidence, the female protagonist? Is there any reason to hate my sister? She was only a few years old when she left home with her mother. As mentioned in the article, she was three years older than the male protagonist. At that time, the male protagonist was only seven years old and her sister was ten. What does a ten-year-old sister know? She often sent money to the family. After spending so much money for him, what reason is there to hate my sister? My outlook is a bit... What does the author think? And the heroine, her character is a master, a master! I have been practicing in a sect since I was a child. Where do I have such complicated interpersonal relationships? Here is a best friend and there is a best friend. Even if there is no foundation at all, doesn't it feel very abrupt? People who practice in the mountains have basically weak emotions, let alone experts. There are no more than ten of them in China. There is also the scene where you take the male protagonist to buy clothes. It feels really awkward to add more scenes to the male protagonist. The author still writes urban romance novels, forcing himself to write strange stories... I really embarrass you, and you still get such a high rating,

The update is slow and there is no ending. I almost wrote the main character to death several times. I looked at the back and the author added words in front of it. Some things were not written. For example, when Tiemian Xixi regained his memory, he skipped directly to someone's home including Suning to heal his wounds. The main character can rule the three realms just by walking around. No movie dares to edit it like this. From now on, I will run as far as Su Wan can run. I will definitely not read his books in the future.

Resolutely abandon it, what the hell is written after 600 chapters?

I was really angry after reading this. The protagonist has experienced nine deaths and still has no brain. The villain's brain is not as good as the gangsters on the street. The reasons for the fight are like "What are you looking at?" "I didn't look at you." One moment he said that the world is unreasonable and he wants to kill and kill, and the next moment he was explaining the truth to others. The character design was inconsistent. Moreover, in the later period, the protagonist's brain seemed to have not grown up and he could think of unexpected things. It was as if he was still in his mother's womb and had never experienced the conspiracies and conspiracies of China in the past. The protagonist's ability to survive the crisis depends entirely on his aura. The logic of the whole novel is simple, the content is confusing and does not conform to the setting, and it is forced to reduce intelligence, to make people feel uncomfortable, and to make people angry enough. The author wanted to write about Tang San's feeling of only being for one person but being admired by other women. He wanted to write about how he finally reached the top after going through ups and downs. It's a sad journey, but the writing is not good, the man and woman are entangled, they have to be happy or not, and they should be tortured or not. However, the protagonist has no growth and it all depends on luck. He doesn't have a long brain and a long-term scheming. The protagonist team is also not strong and has nothing to do to force their wits. I'm so angry that I really want to curse.

Update speed is so slow

Let me tell you this, the protagonist has no skills at all. What kind of cultivation and magical powers are all up to others? The writing later is the same as Shuangwen. Besides, the women in this story are crazy when they see the protagonist. They are like Diao Fanyin and Ascension Fairyland. He is in the Wei family. He has been liked for a short time. It is difficult not to doubt whether the author lacks love in real life. How come all the good things are taken by your family? The protagonist is currently a real phoenix, and then he has to inherit a real phoenix. Your target is a true dragon. Your third uncle, the three elders of Kunlun, were at the peak of China's martial arts before ascending to the fairy world. Then your true dragon and true phoenix merged to become a true phoenix. Your third uncle knows the destiny. Your target, a true dragon, turned into an ancestral dragon. What are you? Lack of love

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