Three Kingdoms: Lu Bu's World

It looks good, but it's a bit confusing 😂😂😂 At first, it was said that they were Yan Yuyao's twin children, and later it was said that they were Diao Chan's son, Yan Yuyao's daughter, and Wei Yan, who was surrendered by Zhang Lang later. Later, he was still in Cao Pi's camp. There are also Cao Wei ministers such as Cheng Yu, Man Chong, Mao Jie, Zhong Yao, etc. Who can hardly be seen. I hope I can continue to write better next time ✍

The plot chaos cannot be washed away, such as Cai Mao's resurrection. Moreover, the Battle of Guandu completely copied the plot of the New Three Kingdoms. To digress a bit, don't delete the plot when moving works from external sites. Many of the poker scenes have been deleted. I searched for the original version and saw that it wasn't a big deal. In a word, either you don't move it or you don't delete it. It's a bit disrespectful to the author to copy someone else's work but also delete their storyline.

There are a lot of typos, and there are not so many in elementary school students' compositions. Authors please note. In addition, there are so many women in Lu Bu, but he just gave birth to two children, responded to the party's call, and consciously planned family planning? Or did you become infertile later?

The writing is messy. In ancient times, people called their wives madam. Who knows if you ask your subordinates, "Where is your wife?" Do you have any historical knowledge? Dong Zhuo's ability to narrow the emperor's control of the court is like a stupid pig in your writing. I really can't stand it.

When you write a rebirth and time travel novel, don't make it like a romantic drama. It's okay to have women, but can it be simplified? Also, after the ancients died, they were buried in the ground. If you cremate it, it's good if you don't get hacked to death by soldiers. Five thousand heavy infantry and five thousand heavy cavalry, do you know how much it will cost? One ordinary cavalry is equivalent to ten infantry, one heavy cavalry is close to one hundred ordinary infantry, and ten thousand heavy cavalry can sweep the world at that time (refer to Boss Cao's three thousand tiger and leopard cavalry to rob tombs, and Gao Shun's eight hundred trapped in the camp, not because they cannot expand, but because they have no money); another point is that in ancient times, troops could not be sent out. One hundred thousand troops are said to be one hundred thousand, and one hundred thousand troops are usually said to be three hundred thousand (refer to the Battle of Chibi, the Battle of Yiling, etc.); In one state, it is good to raise one hundred thousand soldiers, but in Bingzhou (the population of Bingzhou in the Three Kingdoms is only one million); after reading more than 40 chapters, I can't stand it. Reading this kind of book, really...

This book is great! The content and ideas are very clear, with a sense of reality and authenticity! Give people a different kind of Three Kingdoms!

It's not bad. Although this is a novel, I still hope that the author will search the history on Baidu before writing. After reading a few chapters, I found many unreasonable places. And ashes. . It's a bit thunderous, but you can still see it.

It's good, but it's a bit messy. Aren't Lu Meng and Lu Wei twins? Later, it became Diao Chan and Yan Yuyao's two lives, and Wei Yan surrendered twice. . Taishi Ci disappeared in the fight, and the second and third Joes also disappeared. Overall, it was quite interesting, but the plot was a bit messy. .

What are you writing about? Not to mention the chaotic relationship between the characters, the writing of Lu Bu's advisers is useless, and I don't see any use for Zhuge Liang and Jia Xu in the whole story! Lu Bu was passively beaten from beginning to end, tearing down the east wall to make up for the west wall and beating him without any structure!

Didn't you have any consciousness after traveling through time? Don't you know you are a modern person? Never read history?