Full-Time True Immortal

Overall it's okay. It's just that the surroundings and skills are too messy. When you upgrade Nascent Soul, others opened 108 pulses, but when you opened 999, it was actually not as good as others. The skills were taught by a real immortal, but in the end, everyone could do it in the lower world, and it was suffocating to watch.

The writing is good, but why does it have to be the inheritance of Atlantis?

Nonsense! One hundred chapters can be compressed into ten chapters...

Not bad, not bad. Come on, keep going

Your writing is good, but the division of strength in this book seems a bit weird. In most of the immortal cultivation novels I have read, the Golden Core stage is below the Nascent Soul stage. If you look at it upside down, it looks a bit unsubstantial.

I feel like there's too much nonsense. I'd like to talk about a small thing for several pages.

Why are there four hundred chapters missing in the middle?

In the whole article, I didn't see Liepan, who has a wife and children.

What the hell is it written? It's incoherent and whining. The plot is even more confusing.

The writing is good, but the plot is too bland and the auxiliary text is too wordy.