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Surprise surprise! This book is actually linked to the Book of Floating Demons. When I saw Su Xi appear on the stage, my eyes lit up. It was still the same familiar flavor. I like this book very much. The plot is compact and delicate, and the description of the character's mental activities is real and lively. Follow the update

I have read Chang'an Floating Demon Record, and I am looking forward to the author's other works. I waited until I came to Dongdu Yin and waited for more than 300 chapters before I started reading it. I finished it in a few days and am waiting for the update.

This amount of reading is not worthy of such a good book

Delicate writing and exciting plot

Not recommended, serious water injection. After reading this book, I threw away all the works by this author on my bookshelf. The flaws in the work are obvious: 1. Plot injection: A. The rules are set very randomly, and the logic is often inconsistent; B. The author does not seem to have the concept of dramatic conflict, and there is a problem with the refining ability. The writing is average, and the irrelevant points are endless, but the climax is brushed off - the result is that the normal pleasure of reading is castrated, and the work is not divided into priorities, and the narrative is straightforward. C. This makes the theme of the work vague. After 600 chapters, I don't even know what to say, let alone values. 2. Characters are watered down: The image is so disappointing that every time the protagonist is unlucky, people applaud. The powerful protagonist is forcibly demoted and reduced in intelligence, and the villain who is so weak that he is not worth mentioning is forcibly empowered again and again - it is not impossible, but there must be a convincing reason. The author has no awareness of this at all. He pulls onions from dry land and reads it just to fill it with water. He can write whatever he wants. Why doesn't he write 6000 chapters? ! As I read it, I was constantly being forcibly enlightened, and it was a mess. 3. Text: It is fairly fluent, which is the only advantage. However, due to the above series of problems, the text is very wordy and garrulous. There are also many typos and the writing is very casual. These problems existed when I read the previous book "Chang'an Floating Demon Record", but this one is even more serious. It can be seen that these problems of the author are structural flaws and are difficult to improve. This author is at this level. There are so many good works online, it's not worth wasting your time here.

Interacting with another book is a bonus, but the transitions between paragraphs are a bit stiff, and there is no transition between each story. The written expression is still okay.

Everything up to this point is pretty good, at least I'll keep reading. Extra. . Well, it's better not to write it, or is there a second part and the author is diverting traffic?

Well, when modern people appear, I suddenly have no mood to continue reading.