I Really Don't Have the Halo of Being a Heroine.

Liang Qingzi's journey of seeking death personally feels pretty good. . . Just not satisfied with the ending

There are many typos, the sentences are not fluent, and it's a mess.

Run, it's so messed up, I'm really speechless, there are some pitfalls that I haven't filled in yet, I can run as far as I can, I say 😅

Then what? ? Finished? ?

The concept is novel, the introduction is more exciting than the content, and the foreshadowing loopholes need to be filled. 🍑Story: The heroine wears a book😄The scene where she actively commits suicide in order to return to reality is quite interesting at the beginning; later, it's about saving the country, catching corrupt officials and solving crimes for the people, etc.✍️ 🤔The key foreshadowing is unsolved. Example: Why was Xuanliu rescued? How to recover the disabled martial arts? Who verifies Miaojiang Gu insects? Why is Song Sisi so shameless as Xiao Qiang who can't be beaten to death? Ninth Senior Brother, wait... 😳End: For the first time, I felt lonely watching it. Only use the last half chapter to wrap up? The heroine didn't say anything and just returned the cash? 🍑Emotional line between male and female protagonist: 1V1, neither sweet nor light. Not much to read, not recommended for book lovers who like sweet love😁

It felt okay at first, but when I saw the ending, I felt it was faster.

Author, if you want to consider changing the ending, please tell me, what did she choose? 🥺🥺🥺🥺It's really hard to calm down😭😭