Global God of Choice: Bind Iron Man at the Beginning

It's okay, but the plot is a bit confusing, and the finale of yours is really a bit rushed. I haven't finished watching it yet, but you ended it without saying anything. I thought you could write many chapters, and you could become a platinum god just by yourself, but you chose It's finished, so you are the Platinum Master who died midway. Oh my, your novel also made me think. Tell me, if you extended this novel a little longer, you might directly become a Platinum Master, but you are wasting your great future like this. What should you do? Yes, I didn't say anything and just continued writing. You didn't think much about it, because if you don't write, I know you definitely won't have time, so this is a motivating method. However, if you don't write, you won't make money, how about that? Can you withstand this pressure?

It ended a bit too quickly, and the ending was not well written. It would have been more perfect if some of the things that happened after the protagonist returned to Earth were added.

It's pretty good, but it sucks😊

I don't think it works. When describing the timeline, parallel space, and universe, the description becomes darker and darker. I always describe some things deliberately. Readers are not fools. The relationship between the timeline and the parallel universe and the story are OK. The more you describe it, the more readers will not understand. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

To be honest, this novel is quite good. So sometimes the sentences are not fluent and there are quite a few typos. But overall, I recommend this novel. I just don't understand why it ended so soon. I believe many people feel the same as me 😂😂😂😂

Looks good, looks good, wow, looks good.

There are some typos and the holes are not filled in yet.

Not only is the plot confusing, but the logic is also confusing. One thing in Moji is supposed to be solved in 2-3 chapters, but if you have to write some irrelevant things in a mess, it will be all kinds of procrastination.

It's a mess, here and there

Well written. It just sucks.