After I Transmigrated into a Book, the Two-Faced Villain Keeps Stealing My Thoughts

Xuniannian♥ Chen Lianhe It was quite interesting, but the ending was quite sloppy and many things were not explained clearly. Who else asked the system to save the male protagonist?

The plot is good and interesting😊

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

My admiration for you is like the water of the Yellow River flowing endlessly and out of control!

I think it looks good on me

2023.6.8 It's very good. It's not like those long articles. It's short but exciting. Big boost to the author.

Hmm... The female protagonist is a bit smart, but not much. The system is basically a reverse assist. It keeps telling the female protagonist that the favorability value is 0, and the male protagonist is a born bad guy... There are more flaws.

The whole book can be read, and the author's writing style is acceptable, but the whole article is too short. Some plots can still be developed longer, that is to say, there is still room for development. Those room for development can be understood as making the characters more flesh-and-blood and more three-dimensional. I don't know how many times the author has written the article. There are a few mistakes in the book that I would like to mention. "Suspicion" is always labeled as "solitary suspicion" by the author. There is also King Zhennan and Chen Lianhe. The relationship between seniority is confusing, and the emotional line is too short and too few. The plot of the whole book is good, but the content can be richer. For example, Xunniannian takes over the body of the original owner, and takes over his body according to the routine of other novels. She must fulfill the wish of the original owner and rescue his parents. When he hears those touching words in prison, he will also use his intelligence to save them. Obviously the author did not write the heroine very wisely. Furthermore, since the original owner's family is so good, I actually want to start writing it before getting married. This is the author's idea. Marriage first, love later is also good-looking. I just want to say that since there is such a good family, I will want to go back and see more when I have time. The story line here can be developed longer, and the emotional line between the male and female protagonists can also be developed longer. For example, sporadic likes are put together through small things. Relationships are built step by step. , The author's writing is a bit short, and then there is the dog system. I have read a lot about that kind of binding system, but this is the first time I have seen a dog system like this. It is very difficult to earn gold coins, and they are spent as fast as water. Author, you don't need to think of gold coins as modern currency. Like other novel systems, they are all normal and charge normal fees. Moreover, gold coins are not given out at all when doing tasks. , He is so fussy about this system that he is reluctant to give out more gold coins, and the things in the mall are extremely expensive. He will also make loan sharks. For his own merit, he will stop the male and female protagonists from liking each other. Not to mention that this system is very alternative, it is simply a weird thing. In short, this book has a lot of room for development. The author can renovate this book when he has time. He can write better. Overall, it is not very enjoyable to read. The beginning and end of the process are too sloppy, especially the process. It is very unsatisfactory to read in just one stroke. I hope the author will find more improvements to this book review. The revolution has not yet succeeded, and comrades still need to work hard. Come on, the author really has a lot of room for development in this book. You should write it longer.

The plot is okay. There are many typos and idioms used incorrectly. Also, the titles of seniority are all confused. The grandfather calls his grandson nephew, which is not just a little bit. Chapter 125 has always been nephew.

Not bad, good-looking