Online Game: Ten SSS-Rank Talents From the Start

Hello everyone, I am Zhang Qi, nicknamed Hongmeng Taoist. When I created Hongmeng, Hongmeng split a strand of hair to transform into chaos, and chaos divided into pieces to nurture creatures. At that time, Chaos' disciple Dao accepted Tiandao as his disciple. Tiandao's disciple wanted to have pets, so he raised a few birds. When the list of gods appeared, several birds flew to the United States in the Western world. He became an American bird, and after training, he adopted several puppies. Among the puppies in Japan, he was the most popular among the birds. As a result, he turned the bird into an angel. The bird pooped when he was happy, and the dog ate feces in order to please the bird. At that time, the dog could not change his eating poop. As a result, the Japanese dog and the American bird fell in love with each other. As a result, Japan was stinked to death! America was also eaten by Japanese dogs.

Why not let them all live?

No need to watch the bad ending

It's a pretty ugly novel. I just insisted on reading it because of personal reasons. Several novelists I co-authored reviewed this novel, and the following are our common opinions. One. The underlying logic is extremely confusing. First, what is said at the beginning is completely contradictory to what is said at the logical level at the end. Secondly, the background characteristics of the protagonist are unclear. For example, the text of ten talents and a total of one hundred chapters has not been used a few times. It is not something the author wants to write in detail at all (according to the writing logic, this should be something written in detail). Moreover, the protagonist's strength is extremely weak. He is named Shuangwen, but does not give the protagonist Shuangwen's strength. Referring to the ten thousand-fold increase in the opening next door, it seems very sensible. Two. The content cannot be rated. There is no general background of the online game world, a skill upgrade system, a guild system, or a pet development system (until the end, only the protagonist even has pets). The part that feels most relevant to the author himself is that only the woman betrayed the protagonist, which is exactly the author's writing style to vent after being raped. Moreover, the whole text is completely a novel without a heroine. Xu Lanmo is just an important woman (but according to the underlying logic of my writing, she must be the heroine. This is something the author cannot write, so it is optional.) Three. There is only the author's main story, and the writing is not compact. The villain's IQ is 0, and there is no mention of the Zhou family, let alone the entire world. Of course, the beginning of the novel is very good, but it lacks a big background and fails to be based on the actual setting. Moreover, the ending is set when the two worlds merge, which is very hasty (the whole novel should be written after the fusion, but he has such a brain circuit, which makes me speechless.) In short, it is a good hypotension treatment novel, and all novel friends are welcome to read it.

Aside from the very interesting setting, it's hard to imagine how the author could trigger the effect at level nine of a prop that was previously said to be available only at level ten before a few chapters have passed. In addition, a cool novel can understand that others are stupid, which is also a part of the cool novel, but what makes it so cool that the protagonist is also a stupid person? He still looks upright and upright all day long, what a shameless face.

Is this talent fake? Is it stupid that I still need to strengthen it when I have talent?

I know you must read negative reviews, this book is very good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! If you can trick anyone, that's one! ! ! !

After watching Jiangzhi, the plot was a bit confusing and the male protagonist was really stupid.

Generally

The writing is a bit messy and there are many typos.