Daofengnian

Why haven't you finished writing?

There is a feeling of being played. Anyway, the beginning was good, but after becoming Zhou Qi's book boy, I couldn't understand anymore. It looked like it was very powerful, but in fact it was just messing around and teasing beer. It wouldn't be a bad thing if it was just to portray this kind of character, but his biological father, Uncle Fan, Uncle Mute... Were not investigated and reported. What's even more annoying is that the search for his biological mother never really took action. Don't say that you can't help yourself. If you want to leave, it's impossible to be unable to leave based on the description in the play... Forget it, there are too many points to complain about.

It's anticlimactic, I suggest you don't watch it, you'll be angry and internally injured.

It's an anticlimax, but it's obviously not finished yet and I can't continue writing, so I forced it to finish! Bad review

The storyline has ups and downs and the characters have distinct personalities. The disadvantage is that sometimes the sentences are long-winded and protracted. Overall good looking! ! ! Recommend!

It's pretty good. It doesn't have the ability to soar into the clouds or control the wind and rain, but it's written in a fascinating way. The most exciting thing is the ending, which leaves enough room for imagination, and readers can make up countless different sequels. Personally, I think it's a nice book!

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Speechless

It's not a time-travel novel, but it's beyond the normal scope of ancient times and is a kind of nonsense. I don't like it.

The main plot is confusing, I don't know who the protagonist is, and the writing is incomprehensible. Why does it get 9.5 Points for this shit?