The Mountain Hunter Spoils His Fierce Little Wife

The article is very good

What can I say? The heroine's space is really my favorite among the novels I have read. However, the author's writing is too slow. For example, delivering food to the people who help him work in the field can be discussed for several chapters. This is something I've only seen after a few dances. There are some things that can be easily explained but the author insists on taking the trouble to say them. It's really too slow. I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up after more than 400 chapters.

This is a very beautiful book

Tiannan, I have never been speechless. What is this? Nothing was explained clearly. Is the male protagonist the son of the general? Why has the memory not recovered? Who are the friends of the master and adoptive father? And that Hu Xiaoniang and why Duan Liuniang helped the heroine for no reason. These are not explained clearly. It is really a waste of my time. Most of them just go into space. It's just a few chapters that are always irrelevant. It took more than 600 chapters to open a restaurant. It's a lot of nonsense. The third prince from other countries doesn't seem to be cooperating. There's also whether the local magistrate who went to save the people is a spy. The heroine's father was deceived into going to Sheshan. The person behind the scenes didn't show up. Alas, I'm really speechless. I thought it looked good, but the more I look at it, the worse it becomes.

This author must be forgetful. He has seen or done things in the previous chapter, but in the next chapter he is a stranger, or he has completely forgotten what he has done in the previous chapter.

The plot drags on and on. I watched half of it and couldn't stand it anymore. Abandon the article

It's so overwhelming. I can't stand it after reading dozens of chapters. In ancient times, there was no defense between men and women at all? The heroine was too stupid to write, so I gave up.

An old set meal for time travellers, a must-have for daily life with all kinds of modern food, drinks, condiments and food. The necessary skills include martial arts, hunting in the mountains to dig up medicinal materials, and medical skills. The must-have artifact. The omnipotent space. The heaven-defying system. The koi physique of the daughter of heaven.

I've read over a hundred chapters, but the progress is too slow and I don't know what it's about. Anyway, I just can't stand it.

The content of the story is quite exciting, but the author's writing is a bit too detailed, and it feels too wordy, and the author's thoughts are too many in the story. The author's thoughts are expressed in them, and a lot of them feel repetitive. The article is particularly wordy, and And I feel that the heroine in the article is very busy, and there is no planning, she just sucks it off, and the things that the heroine does are too wide, there is no charter, and she does this and that without capable manpower. I feel that the author has no logic in this aspect. The arrangement is not good and the design is not reasonable in terms of money. A bottle of cooking wine is 100 taels, a few clothing designs, and the usual price of 6,000 taels is still okay. Furthermore, the space is exaggerated a bit too much, and there is Lao Zhai lowering his head to the heroine. There is no follow-up later. Many things are not explained completely enough. I have no patience to read anymore, so I deleted many chapters. In short, the overall feeling of this article is just average. I hope the author can write more and better works.