After I Transmigrated Into a Book, I Became the Obsessive Big Shot's White Moonlight

First, let me tell you my thoughts after reading so many chapters. 1. The plot is confusing. At the beginning, the heroine still has some brains and knows what to do and what not to do. Later, the further I read, the less I could read. It's just mindless. 2. The pace is too fast and the emotions are unreasonable. In less than ten chapters, you fell in love all of a sudden because of the grace of saving your life? Not too much? The other princes' feelings were the same, they wanted to be nice to her for no reason. She is a supporting female character and does not have the halo of being a heroine. How could he make the male protagonist feel pity all of a sudden. 3. It is illogical. The novel is conceived. When the emperor is in power, even if his father is very awesome and is the father of a baby girl, he cannot openly challenge the royal family. The setting is wrong. I haven't read that much yet, so I'll comment when I can't stand it anymore. I have read more than 100 copies of Time Travel and System. And I'm also a novelist. Don't fight.

The plot is too messy. In the beginning, the heroine saved the hero, but after seeing the hero lose his temper for a long time, he threw a bucket of water on him. Then the hero fell in love with the heroine, and even said that she was special.