Midsummer Night's Secret

The content of the article is pretty good, but the writing style of the characters and plot is a little lacking. Thank you for the author.

What? It's so confusing and ugly.

It started out well, but the more I read, the more confusing it became. What I wrote, the sentences didn't make sense, and the story was confusing.

I don't want to comment, so I won't talk about the content. There are just too many typos and some of the language is not fluent. If possible, I can ask someone to correct the spelling. I can do that too. I hope the author will be serious and responsible when writing a book. This is also respect for the readers!

I really can't stand it anymore

Dear author, I guess you must be very good at writing classical Chinese. The text is so beautiful~🤨

It is obviously a modern story, but it is indeed mixed with the grammar of writing ancient novels. I can't stand it. This is the first time I comment on a novel.