Cultivation of Immortality: Top-Notch Luck System, Quietly Become a Boss

It's a very cool article~The plot is exciting and compact~The writing style is relaxed and interesting, and I like the heroine's character very much, especially when Wo wants to complain, she immediately helps Wo complain hahhh(≧▽≦) The heroine's feelings for the hero have become a bit inexplicable, and she somehow agreed to become a couple? Then, I really want to know how they can fight back to Xuantian Realm! Has the author finished writing? (Ｔ▽Ｔ)

It's like a group of middle school students joking around. The way of thinking and speaking can only be positioned at that age group, and the writing style is also relatively immature. The heroine has gone from subversive to scumbag, but her style is still as arrogant as ever. Fortunately, she has a halo, and she doesn't know how many times she has to die. After reading more than 100 chapters, I still can't figure out what the main thread of the story is. I wander around all day long without knowing what I'm doing. Most of them are the heroine's inner monologue and system usage instructions.

It's great, but the ending is a bit rushed, so where is the next one? When will it be finished?

Nice! It would be better if there could be a follow-up story that reaches the Xuantian realm~

Very good setting They were mortal enemies in their previous life In fact, the male protagonist secretly fell in love with the female protagonist After the female protagonist fails to escape the tribulation and restarts her life, she is discovered and recognized by the male protagonist at the beginning and becomes her disciple. Very sweet and fun

It's finished, but there's a hole left at the end. Is there a second part?

Very childish

Not bad, I can see the male protagonist's heart: He can only be by her side, not even pet animals. The heroine wanted to go to a secret place, but he asked her to go into seclusion, so she stopped watching. I will automatically take it in. I can't stand such a male protagonist. I don't know why many people like this kind of possessive male protagonist. I wonder if such a man is scary in reality? Domestic violence men are often this type of people. I have never encountered a domestic violence man, but I have encountered such a small-minded man. It was so suffocating and terrifying.

This article is not long, and although it is not brilliant, you can read it... The most important thing is that it is fun to read! Very cool! ! Don't feel aggrieved! ! !

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