Tuan Chong Zai Zai Is Working Hard to Cultivate Immortality Every Day

There is always an awkward feeling when reading this book, and because the section is too long, the reader feels dazzled. In short, I don't recommend this book. Please don't criticize me.

Love the whole storyline! Very nice too! Did the author not graduate from elementary school? The sentence is not fluent! Repetition is extremely serious!

It's a mess, falling through space cracks four times, being snatched away twice, the sentences are too long and not fluent, there are too many words about alchemy, talismans and brewing, and the rest is completely unfinished. Human lives are chaotic, and I can't even write down the younger brothers and sisters born by the hostess. The son written at the beginning became a daughter later on. I thought there were four of them.

There are too many typos, the whereabouts of the heroine's mother's third son is unknown after giving birth, and the heroine's mother took sterilization pills and the origin of the fourth daughter is unknown. The writing is confusing in many places. It's better to leave some thoughts at the end if it's too rushed.

It's okay and a bit interesting💪💪💪💪💪👍

The writing style is a bit unsatisfactory, there is no emotional investment, and each character has no characteristics, let alone description. The early stage was too long-winded. It could be simple and clear in just a few sentences, but it was full of nonsense. Xiuxian is written like running water. Although the plot has ups and downs, I feel really calm after reading it. After reading 100 chapters, I feel that no matter how twists and turns the subsequent plot is, it will not be able to make waves or leave any traces. The logic is also unreasonable. The heroine can refine the elixirs and talismans of the foundation-building stage during the Qi-refining stage, and the elixirs and talismans of the elixir-forming stage can be refined during the foundation-building stage. Even if she is a chaotic body, even if she has a portable space, the space is outside for one day per year. No matter how much spiritual power she has, can she refine elixirs and talismans that are one level higher than hers? And it's not just a hundred but thousands of refinings. This is too unreasonable. For an adult to be dressed as a viviparous person, I really can't see the cuteness in the author's writing. It feels so fake. At the beginning, she had many epiphanies one after another, and there were so many opportunities. Others also had epiphanies after hearing a few words from her, they also had epiphanies after hearing her sing a song, and even the enlightenment tea could not compare with her.

Good

I feel like the heroine looks like a big white lotus, and she talks in a cooing way🥶I personally don't like this kind of character design. Although the plot is not bad, I still can't stand it.

There are more than one hundred and ten of them that I can't stand anymore. It's so simple. I have the talismans in my hand. I can practice Qi and fight the golden elixir, build the foundation and kill the Nascent Soul, just because I have a lot of talismans. When practicing Qi, you dare to spread the high-level spirit wine talismans and elixirs, and you are not afraid.

It's pretty good, but there's also a lot of nonsense literature.