After Abdicating, I Was Pregnant with My Archrival's Child

Because the plot is exciting and the writing is brilliant

The heroine is still in confinement, and the child can call her parents. She feeds the child sleeping pills when she thinks the child is noisy, and then immediately goes to the palace after telling him to send it back to the palace. Generally speaking, it can be read as a comedy. I don't know if the author wrote it this way on purpose.

When the heroine abdicated, she was five months pregnant because her belly showed. She abdicated to let the seven-year-old emperor ascend the throne and become the Supreme Emperor. Then the heroine gave birth prematurely at eight months, which is three months for a seven-year-old emperor. Then, the heroine was still in confinement and went to the general's palace. Even if the emperor's age was increased by one month, the emperor would die. She is less than nine years old. The author directly said that the emperor is ten years old. This is a mistake. Then the male protagonist has an adopted daughter in his family who is his fiancée. It turns out that this fiancée is as unruly as a princess. She keeps calling the emperor brother and is her childhood sweetheart with the emperor. So, is it the emperor who raised the daughter in the Yan family, or the Yan family's adopted daughter in the palace? Moreover, this adopted daughter is not an orphan. She has her own family and her maternal grandfather's family. Although she is poor, she does not have to be raised in the Yan family, right? There is also the sentence in the back where the male protagonist thinks about the female protagonist. She is a handsome emperor in the eyes of outsiders, but it is the person he longs for day and night, which is even more outrageous, okay? The male protagonist only found out when the female protagonist was about to give birth to the child that the emperor turned out to be a woman. So could his longing for him be that he likes men? The first time the heroine went to the General's Mansion, she knew that there was no wine in the General's Mansion, so she still habitually picked up the wine in the corner and drank while sitting in the confinement. Nowadays, people don't dare to do this, but a feudal ancient person dared. 🙄I read fifteen chapters in total and came to read the comments. I saw the timeline in the comments was even more exaggerated and I really didn't want to read anymore. I pulled it out. There were a lot of typos, the logic was confusing, and the concept of time was very weak. The fiancée of the hero called the nephew of the heroine, the emperor, brother. So the question is, how old is the hero? How old is the hero's fiancée? It is now known that the heroine is 22, and her nephew is probably less than eight and a half years old. Please explain 😂

Incoherent. No logic.

The author doesn't care at all when writing the book. It is often inconsistent and logically confusing. I really can't stand it.

It's not very good. The plot is too confusing. I really can't stand this novel anymore. For example, didn't the little emperor have a relationship with the adopted daughter of the Yan family since they were young? If he went to complain, he thought the little emperor would turn against her. And then the adopted daughter of the Yan family went to see him for the first time? Something like "That adopted daughter of the Yan family, if you hadn't reminded me, I wouldn't even know who she is" in the article was confusing to me, because didn't it mention the friendship we had known each other since childhood? There is no structure, I have no mood to read, and the content is not novel or attractive. But maybe I haven't seen the exciting ones later. I respect the fruits of the author's labor and gave it a good review.

What a mess! I can't stand it!

It feels quite messy

There is no concept of time, the preface does not match the postscript, it is heartbreaking to read, and there are many typos. After only reading the first few dozen chapters, I feel that the plot is just pieced together.

Are you here to be funny? What the hell are you writing?