A Little Doctor's Life Building a Beastworld

Nice

Overall, it's okay. I always feel like there's something wrong with the ending. Is the author a man? When I wrote about that organ, it was good... Ah, the official gave it back, and the name was always wrong.

Too short, so-so, too many typos

Well! I'm really speechless. When other people travel through time, they always look for food first, but what about her? There is no use in having a space, I am speechless!!!

This article is dissatisfying. The hero and heroine have been bullied and betrayed. I thought I could learn a lesson, but until the end I was betrayed and bullied. Escape again and huddle up to practice

There are many typos and wrong names, which makes it hard to read.

Really bad, Virgin Mary, keeping danger around you, brainless, always being plotted

I just feel like it's all over at the end of writing?

I decisively gave up on the book. I really felt it was a bit unsightly. It was too long-winded and the writing was not distracting.

The male protagonist keeps squinting, hahahahaha, maybe there is sand in his eyes