Three Little Kids at CEO Feng's Door Accuse Him of Abandoning His Wife and Children

The father and son can never be recognized. The author's family is also like this. After all, the author himself is a wild man.

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Nice

I liked it at first, but then I just couldn't stand it anymore. It was clear that what I wanted to express was that the smart and capable heroine and the young son with a super IQ were not very successful. There were too many logical problems. I think that up to Chapter 405, the heroine only successfully dealt with the fact that she and her adoptive parents are not blood relatives, and gave the hero a solution. The other things were really stupid. The son looked like the hero, and the son and the hero's son were so identical that they couldn't tell them apart. Let's look into it. She knew some of the things that the supporting character Ya did. She didn't tell her parents or her brother who was always on her side. She hid everything from the hero, but the villain found out about it. What I found most disgusting was that when she thought the child's father was the hero's younger brother, she still hid it from the hero. If she thought it was impossible to be with the hero, she just refused. She just wanted to prevent the hero from knowing that that person was his brother. Is it possible? There is also the little one, who has a really bad personality, thinks very highly of herself and is out of place. It's not because he believes in bad people that he doesn't like them. The little girl also gets along well with the villains, but she is very lovable. And the assistant next to the hero knows that there are three children but doesn't tell the hero, and he can't recognize the heroine when he sees her. He is the "overbearing president" who has no feelings. The male protagonist and his son are both good, but it's a pity that they don't know anything about it.

Looks good!

The ending was a bit rushed. You can write slower later. I haven't posted a few chapters yet, and it's the end. It's too fast, the rhythm behind it is too fast.

The ending is perfect

Although it's a bit messy at the beginning, but overall it's really good, the ending is good, I like it

Very nice!

It's so beautiful, it's rare to watch it from beginning to end.