Martial Venerable of the World

The previous writing was fine. It may be sheer nonsense that the male protagonist loses his Dantian and tendons. The Dantian is the root of a cultivator, and the muscles and veins are the veins of human activity. The author's writing has no logic at all; I thought that the enemy of the human race was a demon or a foreign race, but in the end it turned out to be the illusory way of heaven; the male protagonist was originally just a slightly bigger weakling, but after merging with the energy of chaos, he directly became a deity. The advancement mentioned earlier affected the foundation in an instant... In short, the plot is long-winded and protracted, and the content is logically confusing and exaggerated.

The first few chapters were okay, but the more I read, the worse they became. They were framed and chased, the little wolf died, the senior brother was trapped, and the Dantian was damaged again. Please move these to the introduction, don't waste my time!

It was fine in the beginning, but now that the main character's Dantian is gone, I can't stand it at all.

The closing paragraph is too simple and skipped, lacking a sweet aftertaste. What a pity