God of Greenery

Emmm

Compared to the yet-to-be-finished Legend of Greenery and competitive books of the same style, this book has too much nonsense and is endless. It also sucked. It doesn't feel good to read! The only function of this book is to help Mingqiao grow up and write the mature and classic novel "Legend of Greenery".

I'm here to watch football, not to hear you expand your sentences. I don't know if there are 40 chapters written about football in Chapter 421. A penalty kick can cover five chapters. If you put this diary in your elementary school, it will win a bronze medal...

It's too shabby. The author acts like he's never seen money. The protagonist comes on to kick a penalty kick. There's one chapter describing the scene, one chapter of domestic forums, then one chapter of foreign commentary, and finally half a chapter of on-site audience communication. Finally, the protagonist kicks this point. The goal, 4 minutes of stoppage time, and a substitution in the last 2 minutes to take a penalty kick. In these two minutes, he just wrote 4 chapters. You can only say that the writing is very good, but the writing points are all awkward chatting by the audience, boring things, poor writing and typos, speechless😳

My writing style was mediocre to begin with, but it became increasingly wordy! ! It's really water-filled! ! !

Too many words, ink marks

Good

The Chinese men's football team is the only one that if they really win the Olympic championship, I will say on the spot, impossible, this is impossible! ! ! World Cup champion, let alone talk about it, I don't even dare to think about it. . .

Amateur

The story of the main character taking a penalty kick as a substitute in the first official game is a lot more watery. From the time he was about to take the penalty kick as a substitute for three or four chapters, he still hasn't taken it. There are various controversies and disbeliefs for three chapters, and after the kick was scored, the reactions of all parties are still watery for many more chapters. You might as well write more about the protagonist training or participating in youth competitions.