Deserted Island Life with the Goddess

Overall, it's pretty good. It reveals all the humanity in the desert island and the characters are well drawn. But one thing is that the so-called loli is a college student and still looks like a primary school student. She really looks like green tea.

What the hell, a bad book, a bad ending, the whole text is full of typos, I finally read it with patience just to comment. The Mobi translator and the mysterious man rescued by the laboratory stopped writing if they said they wanted to. The woman who ate the magical fruit that had a stomachache disappeared, and the wood that was fished out of the water after being chased by a snake did not continue. The mutant animal with horns did not appear at all. If you like Qin Wei, you have to kill your current girlfriend👍🏻, bad!

It's okay, but there's something about the male protagonist, I don't know what to say, it's too half-hearted, maybe it's not worth it.

It was too fake later on

The male protagonist is mean in capital letters

Good test

There are too many unreasonable things in the plot! The male protagonist is too opinionated! It takes two people to hug the big tree, and it can be broken with a knife. This force is at least 50-100 tons! Such a powerful force, since the body is still an ordinary person? How can you withstand such a powerful force! He is no longer afraid of bullets at level 5, but is the protagonist still afraid of ordinary wolves at level 1? It's better to make them unable to bite!

Too ordinary

Licking a dog looks ugly