Valkyrie Storm

"Martial God Storm" is really very good at portraying the plot and characters. The protagonist does a really good job in the growth of the characters, and at the end, the mouse does a really good job in finishing the work. The only shortcoming is that the mouse is not very proficient in ambush writing. (Of course, I believe that few people read novels with their brains.) The same goes for "Emperor Shura" It's all just foreshadowing. The early plot is a bit bland, but the character portrayal and character description are very good. Especially in the trial field of gods and demons, Qin Ming's strategizing after becoming the Emperor of Heaven is fully displayed. The most important thing is that Mouse's writing in that aspect is really good (everyone who has read Mouse's book will understand 😂), but some websites will directly delete it.

The writing is smooth and natural, good👍

There are too many divisions between the front and the back, and many characters disappear after writing. The male protagonist is a stallion, which is fine. If you want to write, just write it all the way. The stallion in the front can't hold it back while pretending to be innocent in the back, and the women he has played with are sent back to others.

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This is the author with the worst writing skills and the filthiest thoughts I have ever seen. I never comment, and I can't help but scold him.

A typical stallion article, low evaluation is normal. If you don't like it, you can give up.

The writing style is immature, the expression ability is poor, and it is difficult to read. The plot is also messy and unsightly.

The writing style is indeed very good. It is much better than other authors. I look forward to other works.

I stopped reading when I reached chapter 50. Others have practiced time-traveling well. This author's time-traveling is to go to a brothel. To see women, haven't you seen women? I really don't know what the author was thinking

The ending is very good