Desert Island Survival: the Human Forbidden Zone

Different from other survival stories, which start with meeting many beauties, this one begins with encountering many people, both men and women, after a shipwreck. The protagonist dominates a deserted island. Author, at such a young age, you possess the talents of the world and the wisdom to stabilize the country. The ancients said that the crouching dragon and the phoenix chicks can unite and bring peace to the world; but today, bless my country, after 5,000 years of vicissitudes of life, there is a thunder on the ground, flying sand and stones, and a dance that confuses the sky. In the haze, I saw a golden-armored god standing between heaven and earth. This hero was holding two axes, his eyes were like lightning. With one axe, chaos began to bloom, with two axes, Nuwa created humans, and with three axes, Xiaosheng collapsed. It is a blessing to have such a great hero, and a blessing to the people. How can it not make people cry with joy? So when will you update?

It's a bit mother-in-law, the introduction is too detailed, and it's a bit suspected of cramming the word count, overall. It's still good, the ideas are clear and interconnected. The plot is also exciting. I suggest the author not to drag out irrelevant things too much in the future.

Sea salt can actually be a rare commodity on the island, and the ship didn't sink. Even if you can't use the supplies on the ship, why not get your luggage back? In order to highlight the protagonist's survivability, there are too many illogical places.

The protagonist is a retired soldier, but in the end he gives in at every turn. He just lives a life like a mouse, avoiding people every day and trying not to go out. If he encounters big forces when he goes out, he has no choice but to encounter small groups. Didn't see it

The protagonist is well positioned at the beginning of the book. There is no Virgin nor a harem. Even after reading dozens of chapters, his character immediately changes. He is submissive, self-righteous, indecisive, has a Virgin heart, and the stallion story is online. The positioning of the protagonist is so comprehensive, it's like bringing an encyclopedia. The first one is afraid of being exposed, wants to kill someone, but doesn't dare to do it. Later, when he sees a woman, he takes the initiative to bring it back for a visit. He completely ignored the small group and forcibly attributed all the women to the protagonist. With so many single men in his team, how could he be so confident that others would let him have a harem there.

It's mediocre and nothing interesting. The protagonist is too useless

What kind of thing are you writing? The preface doesn't match the subtitles. Even if you're on a deserted island, you're still a virgin...

It's very beautiful, the author has put great effort into it

The protagonist is such a holy mother, she dares to take it from anyone to her home, her outdoor knowledge is ridiculously low, and the supporting characters are also very bad. She even knows that the villain is bad, but she still wants to join the villain camp. As long as there are more people here, many people will go. I really can't stand it anymore 🤮

The protagonist has no aura and is just a waste. He becomes more and more popular as he watches. He has poor logic and no foresight! This is the kind of article that is pieced together, with an attractive beginning but an anticlimactic ending.